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Read MoreI love you so much more than words could ever say I know it sounds cliché but it’s the simple truth I could pen a million poems ‘til my dying day I’ve been trying to convey it since my days of youth I’ve...
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Thank you very much Styxian. I’ve been trying to have more control over that meter and syllable count the pieces flow, so it’s a little more work but I’m liking it so far.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
I find myself more immersed in trying to stay with that meter and syllable count with my latest work but I’m enjoying it.
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Professionally done, Wally. Each followed the same syllable count and I like the alternating rhyme scheme. And for the meaning, I think the chosen words are just right to convey the yearnings of the heart. 🙂
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Thank you Tim. I’ve been working more on that lately. I usually go off script or rhythm, or make the lines longer with internal rhyme added with wordplay. I have several goals for 2026 and hope to up my game.
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Read MoreThe silence is deafening, and profound Her absence makes the night feel so cold The air escaped his lungs now he drowns In the depths of hope taking a toll He prays amidst the ruins and ashes Yearning for that burning eternal flame Like impressions...
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Beautiful and a sorrowful piece ❤️
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Thank you Fia. It’s those writes that haunt that more profound…and everlasting.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian, I’m kind of fond of this one for some reason.
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This is almost a cautionary tale. One never knows how life will go when someone you once imagined as a safe haven and one so desired disappears. Well done, Wally.
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Very true Tim. Sometimes unrequited or absent love makes for poetry with depth and longing.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Read MoreJust push play and get into that time machineGo back to those days of youth and jubilanceRelive those moments that now seem like lost dreamsThe ones you once chased with sheer exuberance Remember those long nights when you stayed up...
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write with a healthy scoop of nostalgia my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s one of those writes when the music in the night takes you back to those cherished recollections. I know we all have them.
Thank you sir.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I’m trying more with a controlled syllable count. Glad you liked it.
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Read MoreHaving the burden of carrying the emotionHe goes through life always hiding the obvious truthThe lairs of his heart run as deep as any oceanLike centuries, ever since the days of his youth He carries the messages of peace and...
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. I’ve been trying to get back into a really writing rhythm and cycle.
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Well now, this is quite loaded with some serious wording! Not easy I am sure, to carry the rhymes along as you did.
And, it’s a rewarding read, that I enjoyed very much.