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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
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Love your rhyme!!!
But JFC I pray to never be this woman!! No nothing? At all? Ever? It’s quite miserable. :’( Great poem. xx
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Peter, congrats on your hardware for this piece! It’s truly excellent and you are definitely deserving! The rhyme is brilliant. The meter is spectacular. The subject matter is disturbing, but that’s what poetry is about. Despite the depressing circumstances, you still manage a subtle tongue in cheek sort of literary smirk… capped off by this reference to silverware.
Brilliant
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Ah, Peter (and I choose that address on purpose, of course), folie a deux of the wurst kind (sorry, couldn’t resist), but terrible enough to be a winner, eh, P? A nice write. had me chuckling for sure. A nice job here.
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My day has started well by bringing a chuckle to yourself.
Whimsy and humour often make good poems….right?
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Sam Nash wrote a new post
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I know exactly what you mean Sam.
Seems like it’s a common issue for men and woman in long term relationships, particularly if over a certain age.
Most of my older male friends often wonder where their Harlot went and was replaced with Mother Superior.
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I was just joking… ok but if I give her the poem… ill probably end up in the street… Can I crash on your sofa then? You did this… so you will have to let me stay with you…
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I’m bad about giving advice. I kinda agree with Naajir. I’m curious what went wrong. But I liked your poem.
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