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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) posted in the group National Poetry Month
April 5th, Ghostships Drift Through the Mind
On the 5th,
the myth of the ghostships returns
adrift,
unhurried,
moving with the slow authority
of things that have forgotten
what it means to have a destination.They glide across the inner horizon,
full of voids and echoes
from the beginnings of time,
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Thank you, Neruda is one of my favourite poets, Fernando Pessoa and Florbela Espanca are my top influences.
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Read MoreAuthor’s Note:Inspired by “The Call To Adventure”, by JoshBond. To me, the underlying message is to do freedom responsibly. For me, this involves a mindfulness of both the internal and the external. In this poem, Josh incorporates subtle, irregular...
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You had a full poem and you broke it up to have omitted pieces. Interesting concept
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The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.
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hello dearest Brandon good morning thank you graciously I’m happy you like it ❤️
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This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow thank you lovely one I appreciate you thoughts these just uncurrents of feeling rising ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Read MoreIn a hotel room far from herethere was a perfect version of you and mewe ate instant noodlesand looked out at the purple winter skyline You let me talk and talk and talk and for one night I was free...
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oh wow beautiful Indie this hurts…I have such illusions and I still hold onto them even when proven wrong by others hugs great write ❤️
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Thank you so much, Bren ❤️
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That ending is like a gut punch. Lovely write.
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Thank you Fia 🙂
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I remember writing once “images of you and me never equal any semblance of we.” This caught my breath and took me back to that moment. I agree with Fia, those last lines are powerful and painful.
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Thank you so much Willow. It’s not a good way to feel at all.
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“OUCH”. Agree with those above, it is a very powerful write and painful to read and know it happens far too often. -Curt
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Thank you Curt 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Indie. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. That ending was painful indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, appreciate it 🙂
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Traumatic
Hard to recognize when they sell you out.Keep punching Indie ..
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Thank you xx
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The pain of knowing betrayal. It’s shattering. Thank you for sharing your poem.
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Pretty cool poem, PAR. As I read, I felt some of the verses had the feel of a Pablo Neruda texture. April 5th is here and the poetry is honestly flowing. -Curt