Ellie

Honoria
10 months ago

Dear D,

You still got it. An incredible meter. Made me want to sing this. The imagery played in my head of a dark bus stop. Why? No clue. But the players in this piece for me, were intertwined. Trying to run but wanting to stay. I have a longer version running in my head but I’ll spare you the directors cut😊
Wonderful write. H🌷
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I sometimes have that effect, it’s just the lyricist in me. lol. I always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Nick DC
10 months ago

Haha great end there, friend.
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked it as well. lol. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Willow
10 months ago

Just reading Honoria’s comment above & I think she’s right. This one might need to be considered for your lyrics list on the album. It has a cadence that moves & the visual is captivating. Worth considering, my friend? 🤔
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Anything is on the table, maybe even spoken word. Never say never. The song I’m working on, I literally had to start writing lyrics to it. None of the old words were fitting the vibe. Also, I haven’t tried to write a song for many summers now. I kinda forgot sometimes the music leads the dance. lol. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Fia Naturie
10 months ago

I remember this piece. I enjoyed it then, and I enjoy it now. Nice Damian.;))
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool! Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Crimsin
10 months ago

hello dearest Damian I feel you I’m in love but the need for another hit outweighs romance great write 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Thomas W. Case
10 months ago

Tremendous
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Neville
7 months, 3 weeks ago

Something tells me this is so good .. I got a foot that can’t stop tapping .. 😎👍
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

Willow
10 months ago

Who decides when it isn’t? Is there a voting process? Or do we just say screw it & flip the status quo? I like the powerful simplicity of this one
Backdeckbenny (Peter)
10 months ago

Thanks for reading.

It’s more about accepting the present moment.
🙏
Fia Naturie
10 months ago

I tend to say that when I see that there is no other way. Nicely done.
Alexandria
10 months ago

I thought I was you were going in to a Bruce Hornsby song ” That’s just the way it is. Some things will never change. That’s just the way it is. But don’t you believe them”.
Nice!
Backdeckbenny (Peter)
10 months ago

Thanks Fia and Alexandria for reading and taking time to comment.

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