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Read MoreSlithered invitationwith diamond-cutvendettas.Sellswords carved carnival sideshow smilesdarting buttresseyes commencea lust for firesang the bird:conjecture cockfightsa finer company~requisite quislingdangles...
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Well now, Benjamin 🍷
Here, in this gobsmacking piece, is the exact point of issue I was making when you mentioned being “an undisciplined Free Verse poet” … there’s nothing about this poem but an excellent use of skillful poetic devices to command the reader to halt, proceed, imagine, and “feel” every moment, twist, turn, and diversion into your wondrously rendered world of abstract, mind-bending ambiguation, and I say this while sitting here bulge-eyed and jaw-dropped, not only from your phantasmagorical diction of verbosity, but how you’ve used white-space to create mood and imagery, while capturing and holding your readers’ spellbound attention.
Sheesh, M’Friend, it’ll take awhile to shake this one from my consciousness!
Good, really GOOD stuff, Syr Poet! Thanks for the rare experience! ⁓ Richard🖌
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I feel this piece. Nice
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I hear that man. Cool write.
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Read Morewe used to embrace Xmasuntil it became commercialized and jadedI detest that Saint Nick as he sits on his throneignoring the rise in bratty kidshe gives out presents with no rhythm or reasonand the parents aren't any bettergriping over...
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Wow Krumpus is beheaded. A just killing. Nice Nick
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Excellent storytelling in this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moreshe was a sexy little whore one that all the men adored yet she was never satisfied the bigger the better and at times it was enough walked the hood at night became a gang bang slut still this nympho wanted more something out of this world and...
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It came from that sky, and she was not scared straight. lol Nypho she is.
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This is one extraordinary piece of XXX. Love it! This deserves a bookmark! Great job on captivating the detail and imagery.
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Cleverly penned, Nick. Cosmic porn vibe. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moremy fans call me super hero saving the world killing one scumbag at a time some may say "that's no hero!" but how many murders can one see? or druggies getting released on the streets? I tried to play the good guy your friendly neighborhood Superman but...
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Now that is power. To keep everyone safe he turned a bit dark, but it had to be done.
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Superman engaging in what Jung called “shadow work”? Now that is an interesting concept….just wait ’til ol’ Supes gets a load of “shadow integration”….now that’s gonna get scary…
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Powerfully penned, Nick. A darker side to the man of steel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sounds rough and sad to me at the same time.