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Read MorePlanting a kissover your heart,our love blossomed. The roots of our pastgrew distant,deep into your soul. This memory shared,like two vines tangling,blossoming roses of love. This fire,loosening our guardbefore our clothes. This love-making,two hearts melting,then molding to one. Beneath a damp sheet,this bodytangles with...
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Read MoreHe traveled across many universes Trying to find the one he had left behind Looking to catch the emotion in verses Versus the different paths that fate had aligned He entered through many doorways and portals Through every gateway and wormhole to explore With a...
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Thank you so much Styxian. It’s my never-ending journey of telling stories in rhyme to engage the reader.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian. I’ve been working more on rhyme and meter as of late. Always appreciate your reads and comments.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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One of my favorites by you. Excellent writing, Crimsin.
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good morning dearest Tim thank you graciously I’m happy you liked this one ❤️
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Your writing always puts a spell on me. Great work Brenda. xo
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hello dearest Keith thank you you made me smile ❤️
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Magically written, dear Crimsin. Your words are powerful and enchanting!
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good morning beautiful thank you graciously ❤️
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Read MoreI could murder you on 5th avenue piss on your decrepit body wondering how you felt those last moments of breath perhaps scared yet unaware of how I saved you from years of despair because nothing can compare forcing someone to live working them till their bones...
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Nery intimidating piece. You can feel the subtle threat in the words woven here
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Outstanding write Nick. Nicely done!
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This is an excellent socially critic writing. Especially the perspective it is written from speaks louder than a thousand words. It reflects exactly what we are to the people in power: nothing but in significant bugs. Great work my friend!
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You started this brilliant piece with an almost verbatim quote from the colostomy bag in chief and then proceeded to emphasize how he and those who follow his cult think and feel. Very powerful
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Wow, harsh as fuck!
I’m a bit mind-blown and inspired at the same time.
You have a very crystal edge. x
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Unapologetically penned, Nick. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks friend. It is perfect when spoken in a British accent haha.
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The idea of angels vs devils is intriguing. Brings to home the truth, we are all a balance of light and dark. Just depends on which side we swing further into at any given time. Apathy is a thing I simply cannot condone. It’s a passive agreement to side with dark. Just boldly side and be honest, in my opinion. I know people like you describe up there. Aggravating
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Very nicely done. The rhymes are tight. The story is well structured as well.
Great result here.