This is very good.

So well written. This is one of you best. and I remember the pencil writing years, so unsure what to keep and what to change.
It’s good to see and read you here.

Powerfully penned, Ellie. Into the book it belongs! This is an amazing write, thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

I would have been terrible with the ink and quill. I probably edit everything 5 times (maybe more) and then post and edit more. Nice touch with the
Mobius strip! Haven’t that in awhile! What ifs are horrible? I have deep regrets both of what I have and haven’t done. Doing stuff tomorrow is just…bullshit. Excuses. Excellent piece.

I love that closing stanza, I’ve often thought something similar, solidifying those feelings in ink can be haunting.
Great work.

Oh! This is good.

Nice advise. Short but to the point and comforting.

On point….you’d make a very good friend.🙏

Powerfully penned, Ellie. Sometimes less is more, phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

“If you fall, I will catch you, I’ll be waiting
Time after time.” — Cyndi Lauper.

I listen to a lot of music and often find myself writing a response song or a continuation. I have posted a couple here.

You just have to be there in the morning and be there in the night change whatever’s wrong and make it right. — Olivia Newton John (paraphrased).

Letting go can be the hardest part, and also the bravest.
Wonderful piece of advice.