Kind of an ironic ending. I sense a kind of lightheartedness in this. Nice one, J.

A cancer among the freckles…now that is an interesting take. As a poet, you are saying they heal..Are short story writers considered a placebo?
Being that I write both, would I be considered a test subject? Hmm
I like this.

This poem is so clever and darkly funny. The metaphors are brilliant, especially the idea of freckles as little poems and “melanoma words” as a threat. It makes the piece feel both whimsical and sharp, a tone perfectly captured by its fantastic title, “Dangerous Advice from a Poet Playing a Doctor.” Great Write, j.

Brilliant work, my friend.

hmmm let’s see, I don’t write short stories, I don’t have freckles, so all I can do is read your poem Jacob. And if you don’t mind my saying, it’s one fukin’ freckley good poem. The kind of freckle poem that gets under the skin of those who think they know art but understand nothing at all. Why do such people run our society, create cultural wars, and are a menace to humanity?!

So here goes a reading: once upon a time in Frecklesville….. LOL
-Curt

Powerfully penned, Jacob. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Aww, that is insightful. As long as you did not do a “Hickory Dickery Dock” poem I am sure your poems landed it mark more often than you want to admit.

Certainly your art is the real one! the art that shapes the inner self caring less about the materials, sure we (specially us women😏) should take care of our outside beauty but not neglecting the inside one, inner beauty shines on the face, outside beauty feels hallow. and don’t worry, even if we are good with our art, it doesn’t mean that we can get the specific man we want lol, anyway… I love this smart, brilliant one dear Neville, good coffee ☕ morning and POETRY (hint!) ;)..

I’m still struggling to get a handle on this site my friend .. But You are incredibly insightful, astute, self aware and bloomin kind .. Thank you so much for the visit and your understanding .. Neville 🌻⭐💛👍

Cleverly penned, Neville. I got a sense of Deja Vu, that ending seems familiar. Excellent write my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.

Damian