hello dearest Thomas I feel this one deeply I used to climb a tree and dream this is beautiful here is a song making me happy tonight 💕

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Top notch write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Imagination is the absolute treasure! The places we can go, the journeys words take us on…priceless!

What a lovely story! Without imagination, we’re truly lost…
❤k

I love childhood tales–things we did when we were innocent. You reminded me that I had a box, too, though mine contained arrowheads and pretty rocks that I’d found.

Excellent. Thank you.

Aww, to have that smell linger in your mind. Good write

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Being an alcoholic has levels and rabbit holes, only problem is trying to navigate through the quicksand that one is slowly sinking in. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I never had a desire to drink but my mother did. I guess some people are prone to addictions then others. This is a gritty down and out poem, but always interesting when coming from your pen, Thomas.

Real, raw, treacherous, daring. Awesome!! Love this piece!

Thank you, Tim.

Thank heaven for that marriage between the sun and that trash .. Write on brother .. Neville 😎👍

Thanks, my friend.

A great metaphorical poem, Thomas.

this is beautiful in its expression excellent 💕writing is very much the same for me…

great write dearest Thomas very excellent I feel you on this 💕

So many great, relatable metaphors in this. I enjoyed this.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is an excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

lol. Thank you.

Those assess have been known to stir up a lot of trouble. Sadly, I must stay away from them. 🙂

lol. Thanks, Tim.

hello dearest Thomas it this saying her ass got you in trouble? in any case it’s a hell of a story 💕

Yeah, a nice-looking ass will lead you down the wrong road. lol nicely done

I could eat my meals of a nice ass.

Great write and very true about the power of a nice derriere.

Thank you. I appreciate it.

Thank you so much.

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Words of wisdom my friend, an exceptional write. Appreciate you.

Damian

lol. Thank you, my friend.

I had a taste of this life. I know of the family vibe and I too lost some friends. I’m glad it’s all over, but I still have friends lost in that world.

Good one, Thomas.

Thank you, Tim. I appreciate it.

Thank you so much.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. I felt these words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

That was one helluva journey