Aww, to have that smell linger in your mind. Good write

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Being an alcoholic has levels and rabbit holes, only problem is trying to navigate through the quicksand that one is slowly sinking in. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I never had a desire to drink but my mother did. I guess some people are prone to addictions then others. This is a gritty down and out poem, but always interesting when coming from your pen, Thomas.

Real, raw, treacherous, daring. Awesome!! Love this piece!

Thank you, Tim.

Thank heaven for that marriage between the sun and that trash .. Write on brother .. Neville 😎👍

Thanks, my friend.

A great metaphorical poem, Thomas.

this is beautiful in its expression excellent 💕writing is very much the same for me…

great write dearest Thomas very excellent I feel you on this 💕

So many great, relatable metaphors in this. I enjoyed this.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is an excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

lol. Thank you.

Those assess have been known to stir up a lot of trouble. Sadly, I must stay away from them. 🙂

lol. Thanks, Tim.

hello dearest Thomas it this saying her ass got you in trouble? in any case it’s a hell of a story 💕

Yeah, a nice-looking ass will lead you down the wrong road. lol nicely done

I could eat my meals of a nice ass.

Great write and very true about the power of a nice derriere.

Thank you. I appreciate it.

Thank you so much.

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Words of wisdom my friend, an exceptional write. Appreciate you.

Damian

lol. Thank you, my friend.

I had a taste of this life. I know of the family vibe and I too lost some friends. I’m glad it’s all over, but I still have friends lost in that world.

Good one, Thomas.

Thank you, Tim. I appreciate it.

Thank you so much.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. I felt these words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

That was one helluva journey

hi dearest Thomas I loved those days too…I can’t play an instrument or sing but I can write lyrics…I wish I could hear them done this way with a real band ramble on dear poet 💕

Thank you.

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Analog recordings had life to them, that’s for sure my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Yes, the music world has certainly changed with the aid of computers that drain the soul out of a song. I still break out the records, I have to. “Todays music ain’t got the same soul.”

You’re right! There’s an ambience that come with the music. Not just sound, but smells & textures & something bigger. Fantastic journey back…

Thank you so much. I agree.