Hey I think you might well have cracked it Thomas .. You may be able to break an egg but you can’t beat a symbiotic bond now can ya squire .. This is smashing and has your literary DNA running right through it .. Neville 👍😎👍

Stimulating, intriguing, well said and creative. Great!

The pic drew us in but we read this twice and this right here , “obscure memories of
vaginas long gone.” We like this dude

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend, you hit this one out of the park. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much.

The irreplaceable mistress. What would we do without her? I hit “tangerines and treehouses” and actually squealed! Brilliantly written, Thomas.

You are the best. Thanks.

When it gets that bad around here, I generally reach for my first edition copy of Leonard Norman Cohens New Skin for an Old Ceremony and everything immediately begins to look n feel more rosy .. Smashing post today sir T .. write on .. Neville 👍👍

Cool poem Thomas. Can feel the burn.

I feel that. Chocolate though…popcorn is more my demon. Still can’t save

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I enjoy walking in the dark when I am low. I enjoyed your poem.
Just the other day I trudged through the woods after nightfall with the dogs.
I also like the picture. a long exposure.
Regards
James

Thank you.

One hell of a write.

Go back to bed and rest.

Haunting piece of poetry Thomas. Dark and claustrophobic. Wonderfully executed!

my condolences a very well written piece this pulls at my heart my son was 37 when he died that way leaving a family behind great write ❤️

Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is an excellent write my friend. I relate to this one. Sorry about your friend, that sucks. Appreciate you.

Damian

Ouch’ I’m guessing we all get duff days .. but this one takes some beating .. My sincere condolences Thomas .. just be sjure to write on brother .. Neville

thanks, my friend