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Read MoreTake me as the sun risesWhen the night discards meWhen the mind is between worldsWhen the moment comes, I will feel you, it will be the endTake me at noonThe heat scorches the fleshBeads of sweat trickle down to...
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Thank you. I have been busy lately and I wanted to post something soft but still Fia. lol
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Love the idea of the series. Love just the subtle romance.
Great ink.
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Thank you. I usually am blunt, but this helps to practice pulling it back once in a while.
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This vibe is so sexy and picturesque. I like the mood it invokes.
Much respect.
Naaj
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Thank you, I do not have to be in your face to get my point across all the time. Lol.
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Read MoreI sit here in silence as I watch my mother go through the ceremonial lighting of the candle. This is not something bad; it is the norm for our family. Once a year, we all, the female patriarchy of...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! This was incredible storytelling, and I even welled up with tears, I knew that the Butterfly and professor was a metaphor for something really going on. Powerful ending, the foreshadowing was precisely executed. Thank you for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, Damian. I was trying to think how a young person would convey what is going on in their own way. Not all of them come straight out and say anything.
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Truly beautiful.
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Thank you, Thomas. It is a hard thing for most people to read.
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Marvelous write. Well done.
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That means alot, Keith. Thank you;))
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Read MoreBack in the kitchen, I dusted the fish with cornmeal while the Fry Daddy heated. A thunderhead rolled in the distance. I watched through the window as black clouds covered the sky, flashes of lightning and ominous rumbles.The door...
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Passionately penned, DK. Really good dialogue my friend, and it’s use of telling a story through their interactions. Of course you always bring the heat with your erotica. Fantastic chapter. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I’m glad the dialogue works. Thanks for following along on this one!
xoxo
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Na… it’s a free offering and catharsis. I’m glad you like it!
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Superb work, you dirty girl. You need spanked. lol
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My panties have been around my ankles since the last time you told me this. Get busy!
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lol. You are the best.
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Damn YOU!
You’ve stripped me of my resolve to resist being jealous of another writer’s skills, fundamentally allocating myself to second rate status … still, honesty is honesty, and all I can honestly admit is how I now yearn to write as skillfully as You! C’est la vie!
Okay, Lady, I’m addicted! Why deny it, when it’s so obvious by this recurring, throbbing bulge, labored breath, and repeated trips to lower the thermostat setting?
Hm? I can’t even begin to guess what’s next … well, I’ll just have to try and catch a few winks of sleep between now ‘n then!
“Til next time, your smitten fan! ⁓ Rascal🖌BTW: Love the photos throughout!
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Just stop with the ‘second rate’ crap. You know you’re a literary majesty, so knight me with your scepter. I’ve been dying to kneel before you.
Photos? I’m trying to keep those publicly acceptable, even if my stories are not. It’s a challenge.
Thanks for reading this, Richard!
xoxoxo
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Read MoreMeeting up with the ladies at the bar to blow off some steam on a Friday night. It's supposed to be a relaxing night but instead it turned into this conversation.Hello ladies, and welcome to the Do It Right...
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Phenomenal storytelling, Fia. Always love your dialogue it’s very authentic my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI could hear Joe Nichols' "Brokenheartsville" blasting through the bathroom door as I reached for the handle. Dan had his phone volume on maximum and was harmonizing to the piece perfectly."...Here's to the past, they can kiss my glass!...
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First word and first reaction. Jesus.
I do not say that often, but you made me say it so many times that I may have to go to church. What a chapter.-
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Conveniently, tomorrow is Sunday. Woops… that’s actually today in NY. I’ve got 3 minutes.
So, anyway… I hope that means you like it.
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Passionately penned, DK. You definitely know your way around adjectives my friend. Very descriptive indeed, the flashback with the events of the wedding, was a nice contrast to the festivities. Deep undertones my friend, incredible storytelling. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It makes me happy that you noticed the wedding flashback because putting that in there was sort of a pinnacle to the experience. I didn’t mean for it to be a contrast so much as a reference to guilt and obscenity, but then, you’re right. What could be more opposite than matrimony and slimy bathroom infidelity?
You always make me think, Damian.
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Hell yeah. Publish this stuff Meg!!!
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Yeah, I can definitely see this in Barnes and Noble. I’m glad you like it, though! Thanks for following me on this.
xoxo
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Wow. You nailed this one.
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Hot Damn, Thomas! I was waiting for you to give me the go ahead. More to come…
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Ohhh, goodness-ME!
How can I adequately explain how fully I’ve enjoyed the foreplay, and every single succulently filling bit between Dan’s ‘n Meg’s actual consummation, and ummm-HMMM, what a magnificently sublime consummational array of endlessly various climaxes it was … WHEWWWEE!
Excuse me, please, Ma’am, while I turn up the oxygen supply!
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You know, I never thought of this as ‘consummation’, but I’ll give you that interpretation! I’m super pumped that you like what you see, and I hope you can imagine what you read adequately enough to take that to bed.
I love your comments, Richard!
xoxo
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Kinda get’s the blood moving, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian