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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Senryu
HauntedA single tear drops
Haunted by her lost lover
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Read MoreIn the sea of blue-green glass The cracks and slivers are camouflaged Beauty entices and invites you to touch Unaware minute cuts into unsuspecting skin When eyes focus You see the warped and corrupted shards Lessons learned and ingrained into the subconscious As blood drips and...
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I see this as someone discovering the blue green glass for the first time. Interesting poem, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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I see it as a discovering of the truth about someone close.
It’s a great write however I interpret it.🙏-
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Thank you, Peter;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I love your musings. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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good morning lovely Fia this went from beautiful to dark carried out by the frothing sea so poignant ❤️
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Thank you, crimsin 🩷
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Beauty brought fore by abrasion.
An important truth of nature I believe.-
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Yes it is. Thank you, Jim;))
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Chère F.,
Pollution in its mildest form.
An environmental poem in disguise.
See? That’s the fun of it. To write something small and everyone had his/her own ideas about it.
Pure genius, no matter how you look at it.Keep ‘em coming please…..
Warmest regards, Gus-
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Thank you, Gus (I will try to keep going:) )
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Excellent analogy…beauty often disguises danger for the unwary
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Thank you, Willow;))
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Very mysterious and philosophical.
Regards JamesI love the way glass goes from sharp and dangerous to soft and smooth with the passing tides
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Thank you, James;))
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
This is my Free verse
Do you hear the sun?
As the rays beat down on the ground,
It is subtle but poignant
It’s purpose is to burn.
The exquisite heat,
does not match the coolness in your eyesDo you smell the wind?
Multicolored in its complexity
Surrounds you,
Invades your very core.
It gives you life.
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Beautifully imagined, Fia, an excellent effort!
Deserves a VERY strong title!ISSUES TO CONSIDER:
1. Unnecessarily Capitalizing every line, which tends to confuse when one complete line, thought, etc; begins or ends, effectively stumbling the flow, attention, and overall magical smoothness of a poem’s captive spell.
2. Poetic voice … how a poe…Read More-
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I’ll work on it. Thanks for the guidance
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You make sharing a distinct pleasure. 🙏
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Read MoreHow was he supposed to know what war looks likeWhen he had a duty he had to go fight How was she supposed to stand and guard her heartWhen she had no one to hold, she stood apart They learned through...
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Wonderful tribute, Fia. You brought out the essence of what it’s all about.
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Thank you, Tim😊
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Fantastic!
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Thank you, Adagio 😊
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A worthy and well deserved tribute
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Thank you, Jim;))
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Great tribute for a very special day.
Thank you for posting this:)-
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Thank you for reading this, Adel;))
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Fia, the river of your compassion for our soldiers flowed like deep channel of understanding and empathy here. This also flowed beautifully as a poem. I could feel the emotions you evoked with this poem. This is truly a poem of remembrance and understanding for people who sadly are left behind long after the battle is over because their battle continues long after the war is over.
John
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Thank you, John it is true we fail to realize that some of them are still fighting.
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent tribute piece my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Your brilliant poem shines with empathy, respect and understanding. Sadly, history repeats itself again and again. How many reminders like your heart touching and thought provoking poem will be needed until humankind learns to solve conflicts non-violently? Peace my friend!
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Thank you, EIke, I agree when will we learn?
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Chère F.,
What an exceptional write!
And before we point the finger of blame (if this is English) it is good to know that every country made their own mistakes at one time or another.
And as Goldenmyst says: the battle continues long after the war is over.What an immense victory of talent (yours) over matter.
Warm regards, Gus
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Thank you, Gus. No blame shaming at all. Just acknowledging people are people and these particular people should be honored. Every country should honor its soldiers.
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Fantastic tribute. Well said.
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Thank you, Vision;))
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It seems all these years later, we are still hearing the reverberation of the lyrics to John Lennon’s song, “Imagine”. Living life in peace. When will it ever be?
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I wish I know the answer to that. Thank you, Kelly;))
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