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Read MoreWhat remains of my sun? Clouds, facades of the high skies, obscuring mirrored daystars of my eyes! There toy are in my sky, whirling in tears in the wind. I want to reach up and grab hold of you. I see the two searing-white pearls of...
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Title is an attention grabber. Third stanza is so sad.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. That ending drives the point home my friend. Exceptional write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe season of a broken heart is upon me.Heartsick, this burning pain roarswithin my stricken heart chambers.The budding of my youthful heart,my tempestuous squalls - the wildfire of my youth. A blooming summer heartglowing with affection in the light which I bask.An...
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In the furnace of my heart, my desires hibernate. favorite line
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Haha, definitely a poem for the winter season, however, going through my archive I just had to post this now… 😉
Daniel
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how you describe yourself a person who writes at night and looks deeper than most to get the core of things.
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Powerful work.
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Life of a writer, LDF. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreAs I move on from my haunting past, I learn to breathe again. From thoughts of suicide and the horrid escalation to attempting it, I survived. November, 2018 was the worst month of my life, devastating it is to almost die. Liberating it was afterwards, when I spent months...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. That’s a tough one my friend, I have anxiety, depression, and was an alcoholic. It’s not the same as what you’re going through. But I do know how it feels to be in the trenches fighting for sanity and hope. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreEngulfing me in its black cloud,candles nowhere near to force the night to withdraw.Not like I would want it to,I welcome the dark of night,I condemn the light of day,where no horizon high enough could the daystar sink beneathso rapidly, as...
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I truly feel for you, Daniel. I know what it’s like to pray for darkness. There is hope, just keep going, my friend.
There is a song your piece reminds me of.
“But it’s too late to go back
I can see the darkness through the cracks.
Daylight fading, I curse the breaking.
The day is gone”-
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Thanks, Alexandria. I’m going to check it out. I need a miracle by this point
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. I know what’s it like to be a creature of night, incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Really like the closing line…