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Just beautiful…
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hi Pete thanks for looking. Glad you liked❤️
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I don’t think they get any sweeter than you Damian. I appreciate you too.❤️
Jackie
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Intriguing work.
It feels as if it’s going somewhere beyond the cafe.
I enjoyed it.
Regards
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Hi James 🙂
Yeah, they have the new three word challenge 🙂 took me a minute to figure out how to do it like how to submit it lol glad you liked it. Always a pleasure to see you my friend.
Jackie ❤️
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I loved this so incredibly much my friend. The intensity of passion and her sorrow and then the stranger named compassion taking her in his heart just touched mine deeply. I am moved and touched.
John
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Yeah, they have the three world challenge here, John, so I thought I’d give it a try. I didn’t get any traction but that’s OK. I did enjoy how this came out too. Always a pleasure to see you on my page my friend. Love you, bro❤️
your sis, Jackie.❤️
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Read MoreAfter she hired a Professional landscaperto come in and make her fairgrounds hospitableHe still denied her a face-to-face meeting with the bearded ladyOnly to then have the nerve to requestshe play with his super-soakerupon demand…Jsyk, the bearded lady, the...
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this is very sexy and clever 💕
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It’s hilarious is what it is so good to see you Crim❤️🌹 Love you girl more than you think.
Always, your sister, Jackie❤️
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Cleverly penned, Jackie. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian! Glad you enjoyed this silly little piece of metaphors. They are truths to some degree lmao!😂
I enjoy seeing you on my page thank you, brother
Jackie 👍🏻❤️
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I love how you had to clear that up. Very funny. Nice piece here.
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Fia❤️
It’s really nice to see you on my page today,
I hope life has been kind to you. Sorry I haven’t been around much.
Love Your Sister
Jackie 🌹
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Thank you, my darling. I like making these kind of funny little zingers. It’s a series actually I have another one. I’m gonna post later. I’ve only gotten to one and two though it’s a work in progress. It’s always wonderful to see you on my page Adira❤️❤️🌹
Your sister, Jackie❤️
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Read MoreThe sputtering smoke of her lamp, throwing quivering shadows on the the cold stone walls of her tomb. But she cannot escape death. And she cannot embrace the life she once possessed in daylight. So, her Gothic heart thunders on, the crimson lamplight of her soullessness, merely...
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Superb write, Daniel. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The atmospheric density and the haunting dark imagery catch the readers attention with the first words. Your gothic queen is a wonderfully terrifying beauty who makes me want to read more. Brilliant work, Daniel!
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Doing a complete rewrite. As I have realized the potential for this story…
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What imagery. You have the magic of the pen
Daniel. I was completely pulled in from the first line. Thanks for sharing
Jackie 👍🏻
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Read MoreThe moment the holy water sizzled on my flesh, I knewthat I was destined for flames. The priest saw it, frownedand no longer called me, "son."He walked on by, never to bless me again. The moment I died, I ascended.Below me...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Daniel I fear I will be judged for my delusions I think I will go to hell this is uplifting way to look at things 💕
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I believe I’m going to hell too. We can’t decide when, but we can decide how we meet that end. Love this life the fullest and to any good God that should count for something. I’ll stay strong if you stay strong, Brenda.
Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist
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thank you Daniel hugs 💕
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Read MoreWith each shallowing pulse,my heart bleeds on.With each beat,my heart hollows. With each weakening push of blood through my veins,my heart bleeds on,and my limbs turn cold and deathlike. With each beating of my drum silencing,you can no longer press your...
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Death and passion rolled up in one. The repetition of the heart beating makes it more powerful.
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Sounds like something Type O Negative could put music too. If Peter Steele was still with us. Nicely done, Daniel. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s for the three word competition. I hope I did it right thanks for looking Adira. Love you girl.❤️