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Read MoreQUIRKY SOCKS Socks is an imaginary catthat I have had off and onsince childhood. The real Socks was a stray I found. His life ended abruptly inthe back of a garbage truckbecause of the sadistic womanthat I unfortunately called Mom. She said...
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Made me laugh…..a lot.
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I can always put my picture back up. You can rub me all you want. :)))
Did I tell you I have an imaginary dog named underware? :-}
Funny. (the ending I mean)
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I really liked this one.
If you ask me …..I’ll tell you why?Have a nice day.
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Why Peter?
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I’m glad you asked.
I liked it because it reminded me of me, though I don’t have any imaginary friends.I liked it even more because it revealed another side to Paula.A softer,more introspective,less brutalized and probably more honest Paula.
Of course, I could be totally wrong,it could be another fictional piece from you…..
Have a nice day.
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My last one about a vulture echoes your thoughts, minus socks.
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Socks has been mentioned a few times.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More
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Thank you
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Read MoreShe steps from the showera vision of warmth and water and light. Steam still clinging to her skin,drops tracing paths down her shoulders,the air itself seems to hush for her.That towel, drawn so tight to guard her beauty.Shapes that...
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They are usually the reason we ever learned what longing means.. and the reason we write about it… beautiful
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Thank you p, Sam. Grateful for your comments.
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This is so excellent. I’m really glad I read it, thanks for posting.
This particular stanza didn’t read smooth. If I may suggest…
That towel, is drawn tight
to guard her beauty.
His hands still remember
the soft curve shapes of her lovely breasts,
the gentle hollow where shadows meet.Great writing.
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Thanks for reading, and for your thoughtful analysis,Tim. I appreciate your constructive criticism very much.
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My pleasure. 🙂 Awesome poem.
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Incredible ink .. and so perfectly spilled ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
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Thanks, Nev!
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Well, she could not get you out of her mind. It’s funny how that happens you always think of the missed opportunities. This had me engaged from beginning to end.