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Daniel Long wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Frieda's Grave

Horror, Poetry, Short Stories, Spirituality, Uncategorized

May 11, 2025

4

Fog was in my mind and mist in my eyes. And voices!Voices that whispered and screamed into the beating heart of my ears.My earthly body and mortal spirit - now a living, breathing corpse.Fog was in my mind and...

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4 Comments
- S. Libellule
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Such a smooth, dark write… flows so well… pulled me in…
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  This is not even the full version of this beginning to a lengthy prose poetry story.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  This is outstanding. Nice work
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Superb.
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

whisper

Poetry

May 11, 2025

14

dwelling in the silence causes me to create ash from emptinessburning hurt whispers, uttering my ragemy soul cringes seeking ever seeking my Lordwith make believe I conjure a God who could love mehe moves in the garden every morningwe...

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14 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Hauntingly beautiful Brenda. Nice work…xox
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Keith 💕
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I agree with Vision. You pull this off so beautifully
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you beautiful Fia Happy Mother’s day 💕
    - Fia Naturie
      1 year, 2 months ago
      
      Thank you, Brenda
      You, too my friend
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Tremendous work.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Thomas 💕
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Never cease to impress!
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    hello Daniel thank you most graciously 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Brenda. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here 💕
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Brenda, this is a spiritual poem of unique and rare qualities. You wove your thought into a conversation that mesmerized me. Loved reading this tonight.
  
  John
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    good morning dearest John these are real conversations we have I think on earth we are often times so brainwashed we can’t hear him when he speaks…he is beautiful a being of great knowledge and yes lusts too 💕
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously John I’m happy you enjoyed this…💕
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Happy Mother's Day

Poetry, Short Stories

May 11, 2025

12

Daddy, come look!!Mommy pointed a gun at her face and fired it!She won't get upDaddy, she's funny looking, come look!

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12 Comments
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  hello dearest Keith I’ve missed your dark humor 💕
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks Brenda! xoxo
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  The relatives are coming. I relate…lol
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks Fia. xo
- S. Libellule
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Sounds strangely… like my childhood… nice rattling write…
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    WOW! That’s an intense childhood. Thanks for the comments LDF.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerful and vivid.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Appreciate that. Thanks!
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. Sounds like quite the quandary my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks man.
- M.E
  3 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  F* me! I hear a child’s voice reading it in my head. And BANG!
  THAT is beautifully SICK!
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    3 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    You made my day M.E
    Love the comment. Thanks!!
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Chain Me to the Bed

Erotica, Poetry

May 11, 2025

10

Chain me baby to the bedLet me drink in your intense scrutinyChain me baby to the bedSo I can not break free from theeTempt me to the pointThat prayer will not save meBreak me to the pointLet the demon...

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9 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Yes. thank you xoxo
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Outstanding piece. Nice work Fia xox
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Vision xoxo
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Chain me with your words! Bravo, Fia.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Daniel;))
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerful.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas 😊
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Passionately penned, Fia. A very intense read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian 😊
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• 1 year, 2 months ago

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