Bloody brilliant….⭐⭐⭐⭐🙏

I’ve always envied this form of writing cuz my jagged mind refuses to follow suit.
Man oh man this is so fantastic…especially the subject matter
Deep…dark.. just the alley I’d venture down

Much respect

Naaj

Yes, nicely, craftily written..

Mic Drop!

Thank you all for the kind comments.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Just the right amount of dark undertones my friend. Great spill. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautiful….absolutely!!

Naaj

Fantastic piece of writing Brenda. Well written and marvelously executed.

Brilliantly penned, Reggie. This was a great write my friend, and they always know. Appreciate you.

Damian

What a great poem! I love the uncertainty throughout the piece…to be rewarded in the end!

I agree with everything Adira said, this was wonderful and so so pleasant.
I love this, well done.

xx
~P.G💋

Thank you folks, for your kind comments.

hello dearest Daniel you are still lucid this is really great at expressing what you hear ❤️

Brilliantly penned, Daniel. Another powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Spiritually provoking

Totally vibed this

Much respect

Naaj

I agree with this. Closer we come to death, the more memories are reminders. Nice

Powerfully penned, Daniel. This is an incredible write my friend. When confronted with mortality most people analyze how they got where they are, afraid of losing memories, or becoming ill, or even death. Most fear losing their identity or remembering who or how they were. It gives me chills just talking about it, because it’s unimaginable in my head. Sorry for rambling my friend. This is a write that makes me think, thanks so much for sharing. Now I will ponder more by myself. Appreciate you.

Damian