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Read MoreFunny how I never do understandhow I am just... a generic brand—nothing special here to seewhen I again reveal the real me. Just a poet with a true poem,condemned to simply roamacross a vast blizzarded pagein a quest for some...
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Thanks so much… sometimes it works…
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This poem itself is wildfire, S. Yes, reveal the real you.. more and more in your work! Another great read…
Daniel
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WHO has ever heard of a generic dragon? Just wow. I don’t think so.
I love this piece, though. You elaborate the exhausting discouragement of inherent transparency to the point of being invisible. We’re all just another ant on the hill… until we drag home that rubber tree plant. Or, you can just blow fire! It worked for Godzilla.You’re no more generic than a Ferrari. Give me a ride.
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Life of a writer, LDF. Powerful my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreIt had been months since they witnessed the beauty of the stars twinkling in the sky. The moon itself was already a glow before the war, and now it is lost behind the constant overcast, which lingers....
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I can seriously feel the tension in this piece, Daniel. You’re building this beautifully. My recommendations are to look at other options for the word, ‘snow’. It becomes redundant. Also, Chloe might refer to the men in the shadows as ‘bad boys’, but Gwen and the narrator may want a more specific term – something more specific or sophisticated and relevant to the circumstances.
Your writing is compelling
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Meg, thank you as always. Good thing it is only a freewrite and I’ll be putting it together as a more tuned first draft. I see this turning into a novella.
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The artistry in this is exquisite. It almost has the feel of a dance floor with lights swirling over a sea of color, spotlighting just 2…emphasis on her. Beautiful, Naaj
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Thank you, my kindred.
Your words mean a lot to meNaaj
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So glad you dropped in, hun.
This write was something personal and long overdue.
Thank youNaaj
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Beautifully penned, Naaj. An incredible tribute, amazing imagery and wordplay my friend. Sorry for your loss, brother. Much respect. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Huge thx for your thoughts on this vibe, bro.
Yeah…this one hit different for obvious reasons.Much respect
Naaj
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Big thx, Angel for your wonderful comments. I appreciate you for dropping by
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Read MoreIt is post-apocolyptic America. Sometime in the 21st century, months after a thermal nuclear exchange between Russia and the United States, when nuclear winter had settled and that dark, thick veil over the sun had thinned to...
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I’m so in awe (jealous) of your flow…
Thank you for sharing!