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Read MoreIt remains so hard to then hedge,when you live here on the edge—live on the cusp of life and death,separated by only a single breath. Peering down from this height,within a dark and endless night—a never-ending sea of black ink,here,...
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Beautifully penned, LDF. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey LDF…
I was thinking about this piece…
I decided the punctuation tightens the write up…
Very nicely done…
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So many parts missing
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hello dearest poet yes sadly thank you 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good afternoon thank you for reading and leaving a kind comment 💕
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Superb work.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously for reading and commenting 💕
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Read MoreThe dawn sky is brightening as the morning star fadesThe steam from my morning tea risesfogging the window that i stare throughAnd I wonder.I wonder about mankind Then realise in the word itselfIs the answerMan is rarely kind.I wonder...
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Read MoreDressed as black as lightless night,the stars exist only in your eyes.Penetrative, oval, emerald eyes which see right through me. Your dress, Victorian, with leather strapping which buckles around you. Signifying your social status. At your command, you gracefully slide a...
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Astounding imagery! That last stanza was interesting :0
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To be continued? Really good, Daniel
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This lady doesn’t fuck around my friend. Epically penned, Daniel. Incredible imagery. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe year is 1940. A time where everything and everyone was in the swing of things. It was around that time that the great, granddaughter of Count Andre Spade was coming into her own in society.A well-educated lady with...
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Fantastic storytelling my friend, I dig the 40’s vibe as well. Incredible start to this story, very interesting write so far. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, I had this story running around in my head and I had fun writing it down.
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Very engaging. And yeah I also enjoy the 40s vibe.
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Thank you, Nick I will be posting part two
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Excellent. You bring this to life.
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Thank you, Thomas appreciates that.
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What is the ‘Fantasia’ Flower? Are we to find out about this, or am I supposed to know?
You would certainly think Vivian would presuppose that Mr. Hooker might expect substantial incentive to carry her off for the purpose of finding a flower, regardless of her alluring appearance. She’s asking quite a lot here – expertise, transportation, financial collateral. What is she offering as enticement? I get the impression that Mr. Hooker is European? (His father was a knighted Botanist?) That suggests he comes from money, though Botanists don’t make any. He must have been independently wealthy. Botany was a hobby.
As you proceed with your tale, don’t forget that there is a war raging in Europe. Britian is being bombarded by blitzkriegs and at the verge of collapse. France has fallen to the Germans. The US will be involved within the year. It’s not a time of luxury and leisure unless you happen to live in Berlin. The depression began in 1929 and lasted until the war in 1941. All travel overseas is suspect and risky. You would expect someone like Darrius to be involved with the war as most of the male population his age.
The writing is crisp, Fia. I like it. Raiders of the Lost Ark was staged during this time period. One of my favorites!
xoxoxo
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Girl, you are amazing. How you just broke this down and gave a history lesson. You surprise me all the time.
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Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.