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Daniel Long joined the group The Art of Poetry

• 1 year, 4 months ago

The Art of Poetry

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Drieks wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Vile

Audio & Video, Poetry

May 10, 2025

9

Precious little mingle fling, I’ll push two fingers through the ring if that’ll make you love me more. Your hatch is patched up by a sore. Makes the mute and tone deaf sing for more.Ring ding ding, curtains up,...

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- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Drieks. Great lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Drieks
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you Damian, it really means a lot to me.
- NAAJIR
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Whoa!!!
  First off, splendid writing
  Very unique and intriguing topic.
  Powerful stuff
  
  Naaj
  - Drieks
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you so much Naaj!
- Drieks
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you Adira! 🙏🏻
- Sappho (Elke)
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Great lyrics, my friend! I like your play on words. Your song is an awesome listening pleasure!
  - Drieks
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate it.
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

stardust

Poetry

May 10, 2025

14

ascending the stairs of starsMy thoughts wind their way through the celestialgrieving as I go, leaving behind stardusta mixture of sorrow and madness wandering the immortal unrecognizedReverse the curse and open my eyesIt is as it should be A great book...

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14 Comments
- twofiftythree
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  damn. that fifth stanza hit hard. excellent write.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    thank you dearest poet most graciously it is honesty when I feel so down 💕
- S. Libellule
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Great penwork Brenda…
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    thank you graciously lovely poet 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Brenda. A great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    hello dearest Damian thank you graciously also thank you for being here and being you 💕
- NAAJIR
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Heavy stuff. But I expect nothing less from you, Brenda
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    hello dearest Naajir these admissions make me sad but it could be true thank you my friend most graciously 💕
- Drieks
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Razor sharp ink… Thank you for sharing.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Drieks 💕
- Average Joe
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  “It is with great sacrifice that I put myself away
  pretending all is fine
  My depression is deep
  It drinks from the sunflowers
  until even they fail to shine”
  
  You paint Van Gogh with the brush stroke of words 🌼
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    what a beautiful comment thank you dearest Joe 💕
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  You can take even melancholy and turn it into high art This has such exquisite emotional resonance for me as I read tonight. You have great talent my friend and it shines even through your dark clouds.
  
  John
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest John that is a lovely thing to say 💕
Nick DC and Lozzamus are now friends

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Nick DC
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Daniel Long wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Dear Agony

Biographies & Memoirs, Uncategorized

May 10, 2025

5

I wrote recently that "Heaven can wait," however, now I am not so sure. I've been a month off my anti-psychotic medication. Lorazapagm and lithium are keeping me alive. But there's one other thing; writing. To...

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3 Comments
- Nick DC
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  The version with Lacey Sturm is one of my favorite songs. My wife takes lithium and has done a lot for her. All I can say is don’t feel you need to end a lifetime of wonderful stories over a moment of pain. But I get it. Life is hard. Stick around, friend.
  - Daniel Long
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you. When the unreal fades into reality, it becomes near impossible to be happy.
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, Adira.
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