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Read MoreAs she sat down on the bench in front of the vanity, she found herself in an unfamiliar place. How long had it been since she had sat here? Who was this reflection looking back at her? Had it...
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I have seen similar situations. Habits can manifest into monsters. Change people into someone
you don’t recognize. By the time you realize what happened it’s too late, too many bridges burned.
I believe as long as you’re alive you can change but at times people feel it’s too difficult. They prefer what is familiar.
This write really reminds me of friends who get lost in finding themselves. They don’t remember how to look beyond that mirror. Great reflective write.-
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Not only does misery love company, but at times both Misery and her company are unaware of it. Thanks Lady
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What a story, Me. She got herself together one more time and did the routine before she can move on.
It’s hard for some. It would be for me.
You presented this well.-
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Hahaha, maybe she got herself together once again and went out, before returning and dying beside her soul mate. Just a thought, Thanks Lady
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Read MoreEVIL TRIGGERSThe scent of a cigar triggers me. I remember strong hands around my throat choking me. I clutch my throatand then my hands won’t loosen.I nearly strangle myself.Then, the day will worsen. Everythingwill remind me of my grandfather.If...
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How do you cope…. bloody amazing write and you aren’t unmazing ( is that even a word) yourself.
You take care now.
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We celebrate the birth of Jesus by over indulgence….where did it all go wrong.
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Thanks.
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Read MoreTERMINATION They say there is a multiverse...places where our other choicesin life have been made and "that"version of life moves forward. --- Rae has discovered that she ispregnant by her boyfriend Ray.Her dream job starts in 2 weeksand she is not choosing...
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Thanks.
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Read MoreTHE MAN WHO SOLD THE WORLD REPLIES There is no dream on Walden’s Pond where once blue-green waters lapped the shores noisily in the liquid swirl of an October wind. Long gone is Neruda’s verse, the vision of the isle he called home; the salty...
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This is very good. I even went back and read it again, to absorb all that it offers. It’s well thought out. Quite an accomplished write. I love that it held my interest all the way through. Well done.
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And I am happy the poem did hold your attention. Great compliment, thank you, Styxian
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Compelling throughout & what a novel concept you have introduced me to .. Story poems so become you .. and consequently awarded x5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐plus the prestigious Nev’s dubble 👍👍
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5 stars and Nev’s infamous “double thumbs up”, what a wonderful honor!!! Really, thank you, Neville.
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I liked how this poem came out. I never saw them (Obsession and this one), as Part 1 and Part 2, though I realize that’s what they are. A part 3?? not sure, it’s been 20 years since these 2 poems were written, but I will think about it.
Thank you ‘HER’. I am glad you enjoyed the read.
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We remembered this time, hahaha. Thank you Lady this one took it’s toll of us, but we got it written