I really enjoyed the referrences here you have someone enamored with you… powerful stance taken 💕

lol. Thanks.

Cleverly penned, Thomas. Incredible write my friend. Love, The Police. Excellent band, liked the use of song titles, and names of albums as well. Dig this! Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you.

hello dearest Thomas I feel this one deeply I used to climb a tree and dream this is beautiful here is a song making me happy tonight 💕

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Top notch write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Imagination is the absolute treasure! The places we can go, the journeys words take us on…priceless!

What a lovely story! Without imagination, we’re truly lost…
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I love childhood tales–things we did when we were innocent. You reminded me that I had a box, too, though mine contained arrowheads and pretty rocks that I’d found.

Excellent. Thank you.

Aww, to have that smell linger in your mind. Good write

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Being an alcoholic has levels and rabbit holes, only problem is trying to navigate through the quicksand that one is slowly sinking in. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I never had a desire to drink but my mother did. I guess some people are prone to addictions then others. This is a gritty down and out poem, but always interesting when coming from your pen, Thomas.

Real, raw, treacherous, daring. Awesome!! Love this piece!

Thank you, Tim.

Thank heaven for that marriage between the sun and that trash .. Write on brother .. Neville 😎👍

Thanks, my friend.

A great metaphorical poem, Thomas.

this is beautiful in its expression excellent 💕writing is very much the same for me…

great write dearest Thomas very excellent I feel you on this 💕

So many great, relatable metaphors in this. I enjoyed this.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is an excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

lol. Thank you.