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Harriet-Jacqui xx wrote a new post
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Harriet-Jacqui xx wrote a new post
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Please that we caught the next installment, not as we had originally assumed, thankfully. We thought that there was some deception afoot. We find it human adult females feel one way about making love to virgin men but an adult man will actively seek out a virgin female. We really like this piece Lady and always your model selection matches
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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend, I really dig the layers in your work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Stirring stuff, Thomas! I felt I was there with you, with her, with her ass – knowing how tremendously realistic your delicious poetic fantasies tend to become mid-verse… it’s probably just as well that I wasn’t! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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I live how you brilliantly rounded this out – starting with the ass, and finishing with the ass. The darker, harsher, more gritty memories walking between the reminiscence of that ass. It teases with questions but in the kind of way that stirs the mind rather than leaving dissatisfied. Always that ass…
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Monster
Teeth bared
He’s scared
His mind’s a mess
Trying to handle with finesse
But to no avail-this ship has sailed
If it was meant to be-he will return to me-
A laudable effort, Fia 👍
I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More
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Fia Naturie posted in the group The Art of Poetry
(My poem for the picture)
No meaning
I sit here thinking
Life has little meaning
Once I lived in luxury
Now I live in memory
What is the meaning of my life?
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Yes we’re still here and so glad that she gave him a second and possibly a third chance to improve. Tight read Lady