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    Bass Guitar

    Do you feel the bass?It's deep rhythm strummed out to match your heartCan words create that soundCan thought mimic its emotion?Deeper and deeper it becomes carrying you on a dark currentTaking your very breath awayLouder it soundsvibrating its rhythmic tune...

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    • Hoi hoi
      Hope this finds you well.

      I don’t know if you did hear one of the cooperations I posted on DUP, of a DUP member and myself?
      What you describe here is the essence of making music purely for fun.
      Count to 4 and hammer away. Noise wonderful, tuning the guitar an option.

      Thank you so much for making and posting this wonderful poem.
      Kind regards, Gus

      • Hi Gus, I do not think I did hear the collaboration you had. It must have been fun. Thank you for liking and commenting on this.

        • There were some 10 or 12 coops all in all. They attracted anything between an estimated 4,500 and 12,500 listeners per song. All musicians, writers and 8 of them a coop with DUP’ers.

          Women often have to work harder to get a decent stage. I attempted to mingle fun with exposure to Dutch and international public.

          But no matter, DUP is a sort of history book by now.
          I hugely enjoyed you poem. Was it an Ibanez bass?

          I wish you a beautiful Friday! Gus

    • Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I loved this write my friend, you know how much I love a write that has music in it, especially when were talking about the importance of the bass guitar. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • The strings are attached to the soul.

      Very much enjoyed this one. Great ink

    • I love the electric bass.
      I go way back on that love with
      Jack Casady who was with
      Jefferson Airplane and Hot Tuna.
      Others too of course.
      They always said of Jack that
      “he carries it” meaning that he’s the heart of the band and sets the tone.

      BIG BASS LIKE …. ALWAYS

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    lost

    I'm saddened and I can't shake the feelingsorrow wraps round me a feeling beingrevealing its melacholy blue to mewe share this emotionally charged needseeking peace in the shade my shadows growuntil they consume the lightand my feeling confuse the...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello Damian thank you graciously for reading me and leaving such a great comment 💕

    • I’m pleased to read you once again, Brenda. If only you weren’t so haunted though. I understand the loss of identity myself, so big hugs..
      Seems like you lost someone too, and for that, I’m sorry. Here’s a little extra light, mixed with love. 🩷✨

      • hello beautiful Pandy yes my son died and it’s very difficult I’ve changed since then and don’t think I will ever be the same thank you for the light and hugs my condolences on your loved one 💕

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    Gothic Rose: Part Five

    Our emotions stir       from our quivering shadows            in the glow of the candlelight.                 Rhythmically,   our black hearts mingle       in our beats,           playing music    ...

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    • hello Daniele this is written beautifully I love it 💕

      • Thanks as always, I’m not sure whether to continue it? My character would definitely become scarier… haha.

        Daniel

    • Beautifully penned, Daniel. The cadence has a very catchy rhythm and flow. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Shivering, lovely, creepy shivers down your spine… now that tells me I achieved what I set out to make here… thank you!

      In fact, your comment inspired me to continue this little gothic-romance thread, haha. Part six coming today!

      Daniel

    • Hauntingly romantic with creepy tenderness, Daniel. To be honest, I need something to spark creativity in me and this made me pose thought to a genre I’ve yet to really spill ink in. I look forward to reading more in your series.

      • Thank you, Pandy. My genre is Gothic-Surrealism. Though I didn’t invent the term, I’ve used it in a literary sense instead of art. Thanks, again and find that spark!

        Daniel
        Gothic-Surrealist

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    the dark

    I'm compelled to deny my darknessbut what would that prove?hated nothingness of feelingwithin the remains of my soulstirring what is lefta fiery specter of needgrappling with its essenceso that I may understandhalted growth my desire not realizedashes blow through...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. It’s because of our past that we are who we are now my friend. I’ve been making peace with my past, and trying to move forward towards the light. I can relate to this write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello Damian I am changing i seek the light but I find darkness as well…thank you for your insight 💕

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    Gothic Rose: Part Four

    I spread your petals,    our candlelight flickers         and your heartbeat ticks,              enticed with our aromas. Hard as stone and wanting,     slithering inside you without pause,         ...

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