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Read MoreThis body! A living, breathing corpse! May my home become my tomb. Have I been entombed alive all this time? Buried with windows of sunlight, Looking out over the trimmed grass of my grave. Where the name on my mailbox is a...
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![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Sounds like a bit more than ‘romantic’…😜
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hello dearest Benny blushes well yes…thank you graciously you made me smile 💕
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Oh! This is very good, Brenda.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
good morning dearest Adagio thank you graciously 💕
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
I drift, happily, into the dripping honey spaces unafraid of the liquids,preexisting and resulting.
Thanks for the respite. ❣💞💦💞-
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what a beautifully sexy comment thank you graciously Jim 💕
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
I love that you think so – “..beautifully sexy…” mmm
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hello dearest HJ I truly appreciate the lovely comment thank you 💕
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Powerful. You paint this scene well.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such amazing imagery my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Hauntingly gorgeous. Your emotions ripen through the act and feeling of love into a rose blossoming of desire and passion. I enjoyed this thoroughly. You have the gift of putting passion into a poem of great resonance and deeply seductive all entwined. This is great poetry. And I loved reading this tonight.
John
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Read Morecontemptious need flooding over my sorrownever on the morrow to be let freeit's just another day of sadnesswith knowledge, heavy privy to his holiest's feelingsbedlam vain, I am not enough, I'm afraidlike Cain before me my gratitude is given...
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Crimsin, everything you write is so deep. This is painfully beautiful.
Remember, “For His anger endureth but a moment, but Joy cometh in the morning”
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hello lovely Alexandria good evening thank you most graciously for such a beautiful comment and thought 💕 I guess this was a conversation I was having with God today sometimes I feel like when he asks something of me I am ungrateful…my heart hurts over this that my first insinct is to be selfish…I truly appreciate you tonight 💕
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I don’t think you’re selfish at all. I think you’re hurting. 🕊️🌾
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously forgive my late response I thought I got back to you on this one ❤️
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Brenda, you have a gift of taking even your suffering and making great art. This speaks to me of a soul hurting but also a talent that is unmistakably the source of true art. You are more than worthy to God I am sure. And not a selfish person.
John
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hello dearest John that is such a beautiful comment and thought just lovely thank you ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Outstanding my friend. You take passion and love for this one person and enshrine it into a poem as divine as it is beautiful.
John
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A thought provoking writing, my friend. What will be after death? Will there be anything at all?
I think that the afterlife is a kind of stopover that gives us the opportunity to rest and to reflect until we reincarnate again. Havan and hell are no places but other expressions for the light and the Shadow within all human beings.
Sehr schön geschrieben, Daniel!
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Very dark visual. I can see this. Nice