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![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
Thanks friend. I very much appreciate the read.
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Ted Bundy would smile reading this. 🙂
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Humanity is far scarier than any monster story.
Thanks for the read friend. I very much appreciate it.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Nick. I concur with Tim, it does give me Bundy vibes. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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He was as much a monster as it gets for sure.
Thanks for the read friend. I very much appreciate it.
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Thanks friend. Glad you liked my spooky ink 🔏
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Hopefully not too scary. Would hate if you lose sleep hehe.
Thanks for the read friend. I very much appreciate it.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is a good Halloween poem. Life is cruel and die alone is the worst.
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The older people get the more people forget them. Life fades for some.
Thanks for the read friend
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Awww. This is writing that comes from everywhere. From watching loved ones go through suffering or ourselves.
Writing is a great escape but sometimes it sticks. There is no escaping but in that moment of writing we are controlling the pen. We are the master of how it’s written. This is powerfully bittersweet.And I gotta give a shout out to that pic!
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My writing goes to dark places more than i would like. But it’s a way to get those feelings out.
Thanks for the read friend
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Nick. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks. I very much appreciate the read friend.
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![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
The world can get pretty dark. though I would like to think it’s not about the end but about the now.
Thanks for the read friend.
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
I love everything about this. From the feelings like shadows, to confiding to the stars.
Beautiful expression on such a sad topic.
You are amazing:)-
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hello lovely Adelphina thank you for your love on this ❤️
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Simply beautiful….
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hello dearest Benny thank you graciously for the lovely comment ❤️
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful thank you graciously for showing me love on this it’s deeply felt ❤️
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Yes, you have to love now and love them hard. That message is potent. You wrote this well.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Fia yes that’s exactly it you have to love the people and animals you’re around with all of your heart thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. This one pulled at my heartstrings my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for feeling me so deeply ❤️
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Some are shaped by pain to early. Others, late lose the joy. The truth is in the moment, and loving those you’re with 🌼❤
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hello dearest Joe good morning thank you graciously for understanding yes that’s it ❤️
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I hope today’s a good day for you.my friend 🌼
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Read MoreThe sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...
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![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Powerful stuff Fia
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Thank you,Peter;))
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Heartfelt in a new way
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Thank you, Jim;))
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
“The liver
The spleen
Rip out the intestines
Making me his queen”Amazing writing Fia.
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Thank you, Drieks
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Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂-
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Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
Thank you, Damian;))
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![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
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There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
Thank you, Benjamin
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Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
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Thank you so much, Sappho
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![Profile picture of Knight]()
It builds with a violent intensity.
Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
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Thank you, Knight 🩷
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Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
John
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Thank you, John 🩷
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
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This is cool. I can even pour you a drink. Nice