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The “cut it off, cut it all the way off ” Just screams “I don’t want this anymore” This holds a lot emotion
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I like the brutal choice on words.
I can sense a lot of toughness from the writer.
This is slightly mentally challenging in a way that captivates the reader.
Ready for some more…
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“chords crawl forward
draggin themselves
thru blood and tone”Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend it always gets interesting when the piano is mentioned in your work. So many great lines but the one above just spoke to me. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“you once burn so hot for me
then I felt your coldness
seeing in your eyes, there was another fascination”
I know that feeling of intensity then it’s gone. Beautifully done.