hateful feeling, making me bleed hurt for you
telling me I was everything now nothing to you
my sorrow swells and washes me away
your silence says everything
my love can’t break into this fortress
you’re long gone and can’t hear me
love is brittle and brutal
it can fall apart in seconds
was it real then?
perhaps it was building in you
but you never showed me
then in a moment you made up your mind
fickle friend…love
inside me faint
with a sick feeling…fade
my heart broken knowing it will never mend
no other man will come along, I won’t allow it
you once burn so hot for me
then I felt your coldness
seeing in your eyes, there was another fascination
it broke me a bit but I know you’re right
take what life has to give you, until it’s over








Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write as always my friend. This one hits hard. Appreciate you.
Damian
hello dearest Damian thank you for feeling me yes love hurts no matter what ❤️
“you once burn so hot for me
then I felt your coldness
seeing in your eyes, there was another fascination”
I know that feeling of intensity then it’s gone. Beautifully done.
hello beautiful Fia it is a strange thing but true it all goes away sometimes thank you lady ❤️