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Appreciate that Fia. Thanks!!
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Powerful, Keith. Got me pondering.. Appreciate you, brother.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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This one line says everything. The power of opposites! They are the two sides of the same coin and prerequisites to conceive and appreciate the counterpart.
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Hello Elke. Thank you for the gracious comment. xo
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Right on.
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Thanks fellow poet.
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Read MoreForty years of service Numbed by the whip Forty years of service Numbed and sick Blind to the beauty Numbed by the whip You Gave all you had Gave all you had Gave all you had To the M.N.C Blind to the beauty Numbed by the whip
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Years of service and what do you have to show for it if that take it all away.
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Yes. I don’t think the system rewards people for working hard all their lives. We used to have a pension system and a retirement plan. Now you either work till you die, or retire into bankrupcy.
thanks for reading
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james
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Superb work, my friend.
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Thanks for reading. Sixteen tons by Tennesse Ford comes to mind.
Thanks for your words of strength.
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James
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Thanks. I agree I have seen what hard work did to a man. He finally retired and then his illnesses began to destroy him fast. Sorry to get morbid. Thanks for reading
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What is the world coming to eh’ .. don’t let on, sometimes ignorance is bliss and anyway, I have yet to complete stocking the bunker 😎👍
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I am waiting for the aliens to come and see what a mess the rulers of this world have done with life.
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I reckon they know already and that’s why they haven’t sent more than just the scouting party .. 👍
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Read MoreI listened to a poem earlier todayHow we are always battered and left for another guy to take because we went astray But what about the generational curses that we were taught that men aren't shit, and they weren't here to be fought they're...
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Marvelous piece of writing Fia. Powerful, unapologetic and demanding. This is a well thought out piece. Nice work.
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Thank you so much Vision;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Your voice was authentic, focused, and real.. A very moving piece. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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I imagine this was somewhat cathartic once you got it off your chest and out in the open .. You have a fine pen and a lovely voice by the way .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you and appreciate it Neville;))
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Pow! Truth!
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Thanks Jim;))
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Wow. Powerful work.
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Thank you,Thomas 😊
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Thank you for saying that, John😊
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Fia, this is one of the best poems defining the realities of love gone wrong that I have read. Your introspection here is precisely articulate, emotionally honest to a tee, and powerful. This really spoke to me as a man. You really told it like it is with the sincerity of a genuine woman who has been through the wringer. Poetry that does more than engage the reader it made me think and feel deeply. And the spontaneity here is fabulous. Thank you so much for sharing this testament.
John
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One powerful line. With many meanings. This is good.