Lyrics of wisdom…
Check spelling on ‘strength’ first line and ‘through’ in the 3rd stanza.
Your meter for this piece is strong, the primary poetic element. It is assertive and authoritative.

Beautifully penned, Jade. This was a wise and uplifting read. Appreciate you.

Damian

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An insightful write! Well done “)

Great insight. Totally diggin this vibe

Naaj

You’re a gem…..funny,clever and a bit sexy….😜

Ok ok …. sizzling hot.

This is heart breakingly …familiar

Fortunately for me it doesn’t happen very often but once upon a time she would have come looking for me….. 😔

Thanks for reading and the comment.
I guess it’s the sad reality of ageing when libidos are not in sync anymore.
It is sad but in an other way it’s kind of lovely that we started a fire,kept it going for years and now there’s not much fuel left to keep it alight…..lol

You’re very sweet and dare I say quite clever with words.😘

This piece is achingly deep. Thank you for sharing.

Birds will always sing but not everyone can hear them.

I wake to the sound of Magpies,Currawongs, Kookaburras and Sulphur Crested Cockatoos….they’re morning song always brings comfort to me.

I think they are planning to send them to Mars or something…

Thanks for reading.
I was happy with the ending.
Thanks for your kind words
Regards
James