Vulnerability shows courage and strength
Take a leap, expose your wounds
For you are loved, someone gets you…
Not everyone is taking you for a fool
Might not be a lover, might be a friend
Someone for sure is there to take your hand.
Like an angel, to show you the way
Or at least to help you soar through another day
Remember there are 2 sides to a story
Both hurting equally
Why not build on that, a step at a time
Make amends to all things past
For you are longing for relationships that last….








Lyrics of wisdom…
Check spelling on ‘strength’ first line and ‘through’ in the 3rd stanza.
Your meter for this piece is strong, the primary poetic element. It is assertive and authoritative.
Thank you for correcting the spelling! I appreciate it ⚘️
Beautifully penned, Jade. This was a wise and uplifting read. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thank you Damian⚘️
Amen, girl
💜⚘️
An insightful write! Well done “)
Thank you for your kind words! ⚘️
Great insight. Totally diggin this vibe
Naaj
Thank you kindly ⚘️