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Read Moreyou gave me up as lost to the devilI let you go for much the same reasonyou just don't see it I'm of a mind to believe...if you observe...and do nothing...your hands are just as dirty you want to save me?where...
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No, she’ll never reply. She’s too busy living in denial to ever do that. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Amazing lyrics, really loved the musical style and arrangement my friend. Love the bass and drums starting the second verse for those first bars, before the guitar comes in on the last bars. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you! On pieces this close to my emotions, I always know when it feels right because I get goosebumps & cry. I appreciate your comment on this one, my friend
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Powerful and sad. I felt this one. Great writing.
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A lot of emotions rolled into this one. Thank you so much
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I was so angry when I wrote it, & so sad. Hopefully I was able to convey that even a little. She’ll never admit her part. It is what it is. Thank you, girl
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Read Moreexpanding my thoughts I risetouching the air and skyscintillating feelings surgeand I am transported to that magical placewhere I can be anythingnot bound by my mortal coilrather anchored to my bodyshould I wander to far into the abyssopening my...
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hello beautiful Mary thank you graciously for such a lovely comment🌹
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously for the love here it’s appreciated 💕
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It sounds like you’re describing the perfect world where imagination is just a word on earth, but means so much more in the world you describe.
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hello dearest Tim I wrote this last night while listening to and watching this video there I imagine the boys are learning magic it makes me think of the book where the wild things are and the place they is so magical looking thank you for showing love for this write 💕
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thank you graciously beautiful poetess I love your response 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend, spectacular imagery. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian I’m happy you liked this one I did too thank you graciously 💕
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Read MoreI woke up crushed, as if I'd spent the night being run overby an invisible steamroller.The heat was already crushing me before I even opened my eyes,in a suffocating wave, with a stopped fan deconditioning the air, which seemed...
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Windchill Steak House from Hell. Love it. Damn, that is hot, and it’s oppressive. Love this;))
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Thanks, dear, I appreciate you.
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Excellent write my friend, simply amazing as always. You never disappoint brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian, I try not to disappoint.
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Several great visuals included within this write, makes it NYC size. I love the details.
Living in central Florida, I get the heat/humidity double whammy. But, theres always some water nearby if I wanna cool off. I guess thats a plus. LOL-
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I am happy to see you here and having your comments.
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The details & description you create in this poem makes me feel as though I’m there. Magnificent!
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Hey, Keith, I have a mania of trying to take my friends with me through my paths and ways. Big hug!
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Thanks, my dear, big kiss for you.
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hello beautiful Willow there are no answers sometimes for these kind of questions and if you got a response it’s not likely going to be one you like heartfelt and deep write🌹