This is woven beautifully

To me, this poem has shadings of Edgar Allan Poe’s, Alone. Well done 🌼

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Stellar imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very dark and eerie but interesting. I’m getting a dark witch feel from this one, almost like a Salem witch on the eve of her death. Great read, Crimson.

We’re all mad here, friend.

Great ink

You keep hitting them out of the park. And I go flying with that ball every time! Gotta watch that hook…it’s a killer. Another thought provoking, rile-me-up piece, my friend

This reminds me of social media’s control over youth. They can’t think for themselves anymore being they’re led and pulled in by algorhithms. Good one Damian.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

thank you graciously beautiful Mary you inspired me to find out what my poems sounded like as songs with your song bourbon 💕

Great writing, Brenda.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing dark write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian