There are so many great lines in this one. I think the one that sticks the strongest with me is:

“Complacency is a recipe for disaster”

Not paying enough attention to the gravity of a situation is so dangerous. All it takes is a single grain to tip the scales. Gotta watch the build-up. Your mind never ceases to amaze me, my friend

tREMENDOUS WORK.

Coming to a dark truth is scary after a long search isn’t it?
Favorite line: Distractions occupy the symbol minded

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved that line as well. There were quite a few I loved in here. Appreciate you.

Damian

G’mornin’, Damian 🌤
The enjoyment of your fine writes goes well with this hot wake up mug-a lapsang souchong.

Such a beautifully rendered, smoothly flowing set of unmetered Quatrains (in a-b-a-b spot-on rhymes) sing a sad song, indeed.
They say, “We must play the cards we’re dealt!” But, I, as You, have obviously been dealt some tragically sorry hands.
The one worst aspect of romantic relationships your keenly-writ lines bring to mind, is the painful reality of unrequited feelings and emotions.

“Understand I’m living the fucking song
And your loyalty lies in remaining numb”

Brilliant work, Syr Poet … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Rascal🖌

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hoi hoi
Took Some time to ‘get’ your handwriting but now that i’m familiar with it, I love it a lot.
I’ll be back to enjoy this one again.
Have a beautiful Sunday!
Kind regards, Gus

Always the new, the enticing, the inviting. Desire is a hard taskmaster. 🌼

Tremendous work. Powerful.

This a bold and moving piece.
My attention gripped throughout. You can hear it as if it were read in a castle chamber.
Regards James

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Felt this one my friend, sorrow moans through these words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brenda, this is breathtakingly beautiful 🧡

This melodic music and words are beautiful

Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Steven thank you graciously for such a beautiful comment and for seeing my poetry though dark part of the heavenly realms it’s deeply appreciated 💕💕

Sounds like a harmonious relationship to me. Good write 🌼

hello beautiful Willow a very sexy and passionate write I understand about him alone having the key but in my case it is of a divine origin my man that you have such in the flesh is beautiful 💕

Beautifully executed. I love how you say it is not recognized by butterfly wings
Not everyone will see the key.
Love it

Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Love the layers in this piece, your writes are authentically you my friend. I’m a huge fan, amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

I don’t need butterflies, honestly. What we have is more powerful than their fragile wings. Thank you, girl

This is so so smooth, exciting and textured. I love it!, Ain’t nothing like having your own🌹

This vibe is so, so sensual and moving. The connection….so deep and meaningful.

Just exquisite!!