Really fun story you’ve crafted here. Charming, and sexy too!

This is a good story. Enjoyed this (watch out, I’ll take revenge)

Passionately penned, Elke. Amazing story my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Sent gut! Delicious and steamy piece by you Elke! You were made for writing such!

Loved this piece Elke. Marvelous in your approach and delivery. A pleasure to read. Passionately perfected. xxx

Thank you very much for reading and commenting, dear Fía!

I’m so glad that you liked it dear Keith! Thank you so much for your awesome comment

yeah delicious 😉

This is sweet and insightful. If only people could see the reflection in the mirror. Do onto others as you would like them to do onto you. (I remember some school teaching)

Ich liebe es, Elke! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Beautifully penned, Elke. You’re a gifted storyteller my friend, really enjoyed this. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Such a sweet and uplifting tale.
You are a wonder with so many diverse styles.

Thank you very much for reading and writing such a lovely comment, my friend!

An excellent story, to remember.

I enjoy fables, folk tales, fantasy and the like, and so I enjoyed this quite a lot. I wish this dervish could visit all around the world and teach people to behave better.

Yes you are right, Sam! The earth could be a wonderful place, if we worked together and took good care of one another and the whole planet.
Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

Power to you Elke💋

Yes. The good things about you should never be the things that you are used or abused for. I love how you still are all of the things that you were before, you’re just not allowing anyone else to have control over it.

You should speak up. Never suppress what you want to say.

I love everything about this poem. It’s plane to me that your passion is unequaled and unequivocal.
I dream, lovingly, of dancing with you under the moon, long hair flowing and both of us in purple wispy silks.

Powerfully penned, Elke. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I can relate. I was also a people pleaser before I stood up for myself.

I was never a people pleaser and probably never will be. The only ones I have respect and love for are the few that give the same to me in return. The rest can go fuck themselves! I love this bold write. You stand tall, showing your strength and determination. A marvelous and powerful piece. xox

A friend once told me “Not everyone deserves your soft.” I am who I am, but they have to prove they deserve the best of me now. I’ll always move with compassion, but if we don’t take care of ourselves…who will? I burnt my filters too. Totally feeling this one!