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    Gothic Rose: Part Five

    Our emotions stir       from our quivering shadows            in the glow of the candlelight.                 Rhythmically,   our black hearts mingle       in our beats,           playing music    ...

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    • hello Daniele this is written beautifully I love it 💕

      • Thanks as always, I’m not sure whether to continue it? My character would definitely become scarier… haha.

        Daniel

    • Beautifully penned, Daniel. The cadence has a very catchy rhythm and flow. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Shivering, lovely, creepy shivers down your spine… now that tells me I achieved what I set out to make here… thank you!

      In fact, your comment inspired me to continue this little gothic-romance thread, haha. Part six coming today!

      Daniel

    • Hauntingly romantic with creepy tenderness, Daniel. To be honest, I need something to spark creativity in me and this made me pose thought to a genre I’ve yet to really spill ink in. I look forward to reading more in your series.

      • Thank you, Pandy. My genre is Gothic-Surrealism. Though I didn’t invent the term, I’ve used it in a literary sense instead of art. Thanks, again and find that spark!

        Daniel
        Gothic-Surrealist

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    the dark

    I'm compelled to deny my darknessbut what would that prove?hated nothingness of feelingwithin the remains of my soulstirring what is lefta fiery specter of needgrappling with its essenceso that I may understandhalted growth my desire not realizedashes blow through...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. It’s because of our past that we are who we are now my friend. I’ve been making peace with my past, and trying to move forward towards the light. I can relate to this write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello Damian I am changing i seek the light but I find darkness as well…thank you for your insight 💕

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    Gothic Rose: Part Four

    I spread your petals,    our candlelight flickers         and your heartbeat ticks,              enticed with our aromas. Hard as stone and wanting,     slithering inside you without pause,         ...

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    Gothic Rose: Part Three

    My crimson tongue      runs up your petal           tasting and licking                the dew off you.Your wet tongue      slithers into my mouth       ...

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    • I love the cascading staircase set up. Well, well I like the belt being pulled off to be wrapped around your throat. Hmm delightful.

    • Beautifully penned, Daniel. A very intense write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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