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Read MoreToo often have those shocking, fatalistic images haunted me;too often have I been forced to confront the unimaginable;emotions flung aside while practicality rode out each storm.Now, the thoughts of those could-have-beens and might-still-bestwist and turn on themselves,bending my mind...
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So well written. This is one of you best. and I remember the pencil writing years, so unsure what to keep and what to change.
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Powerfully penned, Ellie. Into the book it belongs! This is an amazing write, thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I would have been terrible with the ink and quill. I probably edit everything 5 times (maybe more) and then post and edit more. Nice touch with the
Mobius strip! Haven’t that in awhile! What ifs are horrible? I have deep regrets both of what I have and haven’t done. Doing stuff tomorrow is just…bullshit. Excuses. Excellent piece. -
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I love that closing stanza, I’ve often thought something similar, solidifying those feelings in ink can be haunting.
Great work.
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Read MoreTouching the dark I move closer to you,wicked indulgence, my crave for you,a lusty desire to seduce. Captivated, you look at me with hungerthe night is jealousand pushes shadows onto my soul where you look deeply,and realize the demoness I am,provoking...
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Passionately penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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An amazing collaboration. With, Daniel. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read More“Tempest, your kiss, your touch, and your pussy bring a curse on me and I embrace the damnation. If steam rises from such a flame as ours, may it be never-ending passion in hellfire.” “Daniel, even consumed within the...
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Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moreyou gave me up as lost to the devilI let you go for much the same reasonyou just don't see it I'm of a mind to believe...if you observe...and do nothing...your hands are just as dirty you want to save me?where...
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hello beautiful Willow there are no answers sometimes for these kind of questions and if you got a response it’s not likely going to be one you like heartfelt and deep write🌹
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No, she’ll never reply. She’s too busy living in denial to ever do that. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Amazing lyrics, really loved the musical style and arrangement my friend. Love the bass and drums starting the second verse for those first bars, before the guitar comes in on the last bars. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you! On pieces this close to my emotions, I always know when it feels right because I get goosebumps & cry. I appreciate your comment on this one, my friend
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Powerful and sad. I felt this one. Great writing.
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A lot of emotions rolled into this one. Thank you so much
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I was so angry when I wrote it, & so sad. Hopefully I was able to convey that even a little. She’ll never admit her part. It is what it is. Thank you, girl
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Read More“Tempest, your kiss, your touch, and your pussy bring a curse on me and I embrace the damnation. If steam rises from such a flame as ours, may it be never-ending passion in hellfire.” “Daniel, even consumed within the...
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With passion… my friend.
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This is very good.