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    sadness

    sadness wells oh well it is what it ismy feelings collect around me like shadowsevery now and then faces come out of the darknessreliving traumas I crytears roll with the internal tormentI'm guilty of being emotianally unavailabledetached and coldit...

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    How Do You Sleep At Night?

    Been peddling cruel dreams Kerosene lies forged in hate Nothing is ever as it seems When logic's robbed of weight   Still holding onto an illusion  Drifting further from reality Ain’t no calm in mass confusion  Useful idiots prefer brutality   Upside down heading off-road  This house of cards is...

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    • “useful idiots prefer brutality” killer fuckin line. excellent write.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, twofiftythree. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love that line as well, great minds think alike. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • So relatable… nicely done

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, S. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I want music for this one. Currently I’m working on a song called, “Novocain.” The words are posted here on the site. I got the music laid out, got the growls recorded, trying to get a good vocal take on the verses and bridge. Which requires me to sing. lol. Glad to see you back! Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Brilliantly written socially critical text, dear Damien! You will definitely make a killer song out of it!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This is by far one of your best poems, Damian. Every stanza kicks ass. I like the Lennon reference and where you went with it. Great one!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I knew somebody would get the Lennon reference. It’s one of my favorites writes as well, I knew I had something once I penned the first verse. Sometimes a writer just knows.. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Well this is strong! Like flexing on a page. It’s tight with its rhymes and meter, like a pro boxer hitting us with a thesaurus!
      (damn, that’s a clever description, huh! LOL)
      Powerful write, Damian. Golden gloves…

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really cool commentary brother, your continued support means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks, Mary. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Some people have no soul. The sad part is they thrive in their own filth. Great ink friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Dude, I totally agree. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Enjoyed this poem immensely. From the rhymes, to the flow to the powerful message. Outstanding job Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Hey brother, thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thoroughly enjoyed from end to end .. No kiddin, write on brother .. Neville 😎👍

    • This is strong as straight vodka on the morning after the Bolshevik revolution in Russia. Very strong my friend. Truly a power tonic in this age of authoritarianism in America. You hit the bullseye. You are a master at writing song lyrics that rock my soul.

      John

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. It is a sad state of affairs these days. Like witnessing a train wreck playing out and being strapped inside the lavatory of that locomotive. Thank you for your support my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • You know, there are times I wish you weren’t so nail on the head accurate. But these are dark days we’re entered into. Best to look them square in the eye. Brilliantly penned, my friend. Into the list it goes, as you say!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Gotta look them square in the eye, make them flinch first. Always enjoy your commentary my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    Bleeding Blood

    Upon the sharpest    Hook moon of fright  Answering the call     Of a newborn nightSummoning inside this    Rusted metal shed  Surrounded by misted     Red air of dread Remnants of lovers    From who I...

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    • Yes..vampires, werewolves and the goes bump on hollioween..
      This has a great A-B flow to it. Nicely done

    • Thanks Fia! I wanted it to sound almost like a lullaby. lol

    • Hello, can I interest you in a Frankenstein type guy? LOL.
      I love when you get all voracious! This is a dare ya write, you know!
      Okay okay. Enchanting write, Vampira! I love the aggressiveness of it, the baring of fangs and display of an appetite for human consumption…
      It’s super well done and well timed for the coming season. Perfecto!

    • I was in the mood after reading all the fun stuff
      And you are just my type mister. Perfect. 😍
      I’m glad I enchanted you with my fangs!
      Next time I see you I’ll bite!

    • Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you Damien!
        I enjoy fantasy horror.
        I love Van Helsing! The one with Hugh Jackman.
        And The Mummy with Brendon Fraser.

        Thanks for checking this out amigo!

    • Nice and spooky for the Halloween season. 🙂

    • Even though I am not a huge fan of Halloween, this is pretty cool .. in fact it’s bloody much better than that .. Neville 🐈‍⬛🖤🐧😎👍

      • Nev, amigo!
        When I think of Halloween I remember getting on the tailgate of my dad’s truck with my friends to go trick or treating.
        Some of my best memories. We would do each other’s makeup and have a blast. lol
        There are a few neighborhoods in my hometown that still go all. People will park a block away and walk with their kids up and down the neighborhood.

        I’m glad you enjoyed the write! Now go take advantage of all the awesome chocolate varieties on Halloween 🎃
        Snickers & Twix! Even the Reese’s peanut butter cups are cool:)

        • You can beat an egg and a drum but you can’t beat a Twix can ya eh’ 😎👍

    • Oh! This is good.

      • Thank you!
        I wanted it to sound like a dark tale from Disney. lol
        Hope that made sense!

    • Tis the season for the undead. Great ink.

    • An interesting write, suitable for the season.

      • Well hello there Mr. FlatDaddy!

        I wrote this around three years ago. I was in a vampy witchy mood. lol
        Thanks for stopping by amigo!

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