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hello dearest Keith great to see you thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such a heartfelt write my friend. I concur with Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI had always heard, mainly from my two older brothers, that one should never get married. Be a player and own your freedom. These words echo still as I have no children and no ex-wife—my own life and liberty....
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I love the build-up, the initial nervousness on Alayna’s part, her relaxation, increasing confidence, their red hot sex! This has to be one of the best real life erotic stories, I’ve read anywhere, Daniel other than my own, of course! I’m thrilled for you, very well done indeed! More, please, mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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More indeed! The build-up is essential in erotica – anticipation heightens the pleasure! And thank you for the kind words. I’m going to be focusing on erotica for a while now as I enjoy writing it.
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I agree about build-up, Daniel, but don’t make it too interminably long like some writers on Inkitt – readers like me will soon get bored and lose interest. That’s why I’m successfully writing flash fiction now – quick thrills for all + instant reaction = fun! fun! fun! xx
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Tomorrow?? We have to wait till tomorrow. This is good, Daniel.
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I love it, Brenda.
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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wonderful work my dear crim. always aspiring.
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hello dearest Wally it’s wonderful to see I hope you’re well thank you my friend ❤️
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Perfection is your middle name. Excellent. xox
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. By the way you forgot an r in your title. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I know I just saw it lol I was so embarssed I type too fast thank you dearest Damian most graciously ❤️
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Beautiful work.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas ❤️
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That last line had me sighing. Really nice work, Crimsin
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hello beautiful Fia good evening thank you lady most graciously I’m happy you felt this ❤️
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Amazing! Can feel every word in this poem. xo
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thank you dearest Keith I admit I am not always so appreciative ❤️hope you have a wonderful day…
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Read MoreLost moments these gaps in time Surrounded by such strange faces Unable to reason can’t find a rhyme Empty thoughts in random places Can’t recall when the mask slipped Sometimes minutes feel like years Somehow the scale must of tipped Got this constant ringing in my...
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Amnesia, would be a lonely thing for a poet of the forgotten. This was exquisite, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hello dearest Damian great write I feel this I often wonder if forgetting is a blessing or a curse ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Maybe a little of both depending on what’s forgotten. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous work, my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, this is strong tonic. I could feel this in my bones as I read. This i the stuff of poetry that feels like strong whiskey on the tongue. Sad but great writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is sad indeed. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It is cruel when the mind slips and cannot grasp what you have lost. Food for thought.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is food for thought, these are the little things I think about late at night. lol. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Older age? I know all too well the fading of a few things within myself!
Yet you haven’t lost your literary touch! You are blessed with talent, that hasn’t ebbed. Thankfully we write down our material, no need to remember them from scratch! LOL.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Getting old isn’t without the fear of losing one’s self along the way. I’m just trying to hang in there. You’re much too kind, Dear Sir. But thank you for your continued support brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Exquisite piece Damian. Well written my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, brother.
Damian
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exceptional read! full of concise, vividly profound imagery…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, C. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As you so often do, you stirred levels here again. I read this from the personal perspective of memories slipping. A sense of self lost in blips of time. I also see this as the world arena and how people have lost their sense humanity, their compassion, their community. Like the whole damn world has global amnesia. And I read it as literal amnesia from losing time in the form of blanks in memory from drink or drugs. Many layers, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well you know me, I love when there are multiple meanings and endless possibilities. lol. Sometime’s I think it’s probably little pieces of all those things rolled into one. I follow where my muse leads me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Heartfelt. Well written Brenda.xox