Wow there is so much to pull from in this. The first line alone. Your family carelessly remarried you. I never thought of it that way. I mean, more thought could be put into an evening meal.
Never corrected the spoils of war manufactured. They never will.
very intense read. I like it

Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Great flow, and stellar imagery. Appreciate you.

Damian

Well written, Drieks! The words, the imagery, the poster. Everything, wow!

Thank you everyone for the uplifting words. It is much appreciated.

We are dressed in our nakedness. Very nice imagery

Thank you Fia! I appreciate it. “)

I agree on that last line. Razer sharp ink. Thanks for sharing.

I feel like I’ve been stung by a thousand bees, and their stingers fed me coke through a straw.
This is some of the most amazing verse I’ve ever read in the realm of what is deemed amateur.
Sir, you are no amateur.
And I am in love…

Thank you, Adira! It means alot “)

Powerful work. Excellent.