Passionately penned, Brenda. Spectacular write with amazing wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful and hot.

hello beautiful Mary sorry for my late response thank you so much 💕

thank you graciously lovely poetess 💕

hi dearest Benny enjoy your swim let the rest go stay in the moment great write 💕

A great write, for a rhyming one at that. I actually left work early to rush home and complete a poem that I was scrapping together at work. And then I went to the (community) pool! A productive day, lol.
Your write is well stocked with reflection and insight. I enjoyed it very much.

I really enjoyed reading this.
The first verse was immense.
Kind regards
James

Tremendous work, my friend.

If only we could all remember that particularly when it comes to refugees.They were called immigrants once upon a time.

Good write 👍

There are those who do not accept that they are immigrants and try their best to fit in and hide. This piece can definitely start a conversation. Nice

This is very good.

So well written. This is one of you best. and I remember the pencil writing years, so unsure what to keep and what to change.
It’s good to see and read you here.

Powerfully penned, Ellie. Into the book it belongs! This is an amazing write, thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

I would have been terrible with the ink and quill. I probably edit everything 5 times (maybe more) and then post and edit more. Nice touch with the
Mobius strip! Haven’t that in awhile! What ifs are horrible? I have deep regrets both of what I have and haven’t done. Doing stuff tomorrow is just…bullshit. Excuses. Excellent piece.

I love that closing stanza, I’ve often thought something similar, solidifying those feelings in ink can be haunting.
Great work.

Passionately penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian