I can tell that trip had a deep impact on you. Love this 4-part piece of work.

Okay, you earned a “Wow!”. this is very good. The second one is my favorite, because it seems like the peak of them all.
Even, the fourth reads like an epilogue, btw. Planned? A solid quartet of strong writing.
Awesome crafting of words!

Beautifully penned, S. Excellent collection of poems my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Libellule, this poem is so artfully crafted and an exquisite blend of light, artistry and form. There s gentle flow here that felt like reflections on the art so gently scribed I could feel what you saw in an emotional way. Truly great poetry.

John

Rich… vivid… nice flow with this one… great job you two…

We thank you.

A very good prose piece, y’all. Solid throughout. I enjoyed reading it!

Thank you.

I enjoyed the wonderful and thought inspiring musings of you too very much! Great job!

I grow a patchouli plant every year. It’s magical, like this piece. 🙂

Thank you, Jim.

Two poets whispering in Autumn: their leaves dancing in the scented air, colours bright, swirling in space, perhaps – who knows, lying softly on the same metallic glory?

‘The patchouli deepened, growing warmer and more complex, like a fine wine mellowing with time’

There’s little better than patchouli to lure lovers closer.. and closer.. and.. .. here I am inhaling – deeply, needing its magic allure! Space, am yours – take me! Smiling, happy

We thank you, emmagreen.