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Read MoreWhat the hell is this place?Elitist PsychotherapyPseudo Science sorceryInto the beyondWhat's the shape of her rage?Psychoplasmic therapyAnother Theater of PainFamily Tree Reborn Beaten to death, covered in bloodThey came without warning Demonic cratures uncagedManifest through inner rageDeformed children retaliateHammer Smashes FaceRabid...
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Thank you Fia. Appreciate it
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More
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Thank you
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Read MoreHis charm was a polished, empty cup.From a distance, it gleamed, an object of desire,but if you peered inside, there was nothingbut a cold, echoing vacuum.He was the sun and the moon of their small world,and he demanded that...
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Read MoreThe sun, a fat, lazy hog in the Arkansas sky, was startin' to dip its snout below the Ozark foothills, paintin' the Land of Goshen in hues of bruised peach and old whiskey. Down by the Piggly Wiggly, Cletus...
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Read MoreMelancholy sits quietly and I with herwith a gentle remider to breathewe watch the cotton candy clouds flow byas we lie watching blue skiesa stark contast to our moodhurt on a colorful dayit seems wrong and out of placethe...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, really dig this one a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously I’m happy you liked it ❤️
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Lovely piece Brenda. The words are marvelously woven to create a delicate, fragile piece of poetry. xo
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hi dearest Keith good evening thank you my friend I can be gentle when I want to ❤️
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I wonder if that spider, doing what nature intended, ever said to himself – what a lovely day it is today?
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I don’t know dearest Tim I believe if we listen we can hear nature and the earth talk…it is at all possible…everything has a frequency thank you for your thoughts ❤️
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Such a fine verse. I really needed that. TY & hugs+++
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hello dearest Jim thank you graciously I know my metaphors are funny I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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This has unbidden murderous intent. This is a good piece