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Read MoreThe marsh mango held secrets colder than breath. Here, air hung lowthick with the host of things. With the sweet scent of moral decay clinging to the shadows on death's runwayThe bayou as dark as bruised plums sucking, the...
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Read MoreStradivarius of the cosmosWith a long slow vibratoHaunting the ancient lights Untamed as melodious shadowsHeard not in the ears...On a poetic Odyssey
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Thank you Brenda.
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Read MoreBefore the memory thaws the northern light So white the scent of frozen silence Caught in the clarity of ancient bite Before the memory thaws
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hello dearest Adagio good afternoon this is great I often wonder where the memory goes and then returns ❤️ a thawing perhaps…
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That’s a good question. Thank you, Brenda.
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The introduction to a poem, and it’s closing line…when they are one in the same, it makes for quite an impact to the reader, at least to me. It looks quite simple, but in reality, there’s a lot of finesse at play. Your image is striking, as well. Great presentation with its brevity. Much enjoyed, Adagio!
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Thank you, Kelly.
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Read Moremorose feelings entertainmy sexuality tied to darknessstunningly beautiful, captivating my soulseducing my flesh, lust flashes and I cavea seduction of spiritquietly amusing me, while my thoughts are abusedin the thick of things I moantasting the aether and the need...
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Wonderfully worshipable
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hello dearest Jim good evening thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Very haunting and pure shaking.
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hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undercurrents my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
This is my Free verse
Do you hear the sun?
As the rays beat down on the ground,
It is subtle but poignant
It’s purpose is to burn.
The exquisite heat,
does not match the coolness in your eyesDo you smell the wind?
Multicolored in its complexity
Surrounds you,
Invades your very core.
It gives you life.
Then withdraws to take your b…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Beautifully imagined, Fia, an excellent effort!
Deserves a VERY strong title!ISSUES TO CONSIDER:
1. Unnecessarily Capitalizing every line, which tends to confuse when one complete line, thought, etc; begins or ends, effectively stumbling the flow, attention, and overall magical smoothness of a poem’s captive spell.
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I’ll work on it. Thanks for the guidance
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You make sharing a distinct pleasure. 🙏
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so gorgeous dearest Adagio have a beautiful day ❤️