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Read MoreTonight, the storm was flying off the handle, her body hardening in my hands a bit of rigor would do you... Saying. "Mama, may I?" With the hip flask of her naked anatomy containing the formaldehyde of her evermore....
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Thank you, Kay. I don’t see the sense in writing if one is afraid of words. I wrote only because I enjoy it.
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Read Moretenderness vows to do no harmencourage a feeling and dance on the windssecretly craving your touchseduce the moment, I covetspeaking in tongues I whisper venomous versemeant to entice youmasochistic inclination, I think you like a commanding presencereverse the role,...
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Sometimes being to tender can break you. I felt that.
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good evening beautiful Fia I am often guilty of being too tender thank you lovely ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously you picked up my night ❤️
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A honeypot written with a tinge of bonds and chains. Well done, crimsin! “)
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Was it internal rain or was it seasonal rain? That is a lot of water all the time. It can be depressing. One day of sunshine and not even a full day at that. Good poem
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It was English Rain. The winter has become soggy here instead of cold. Thanks for reading.
Regards
James
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Read MoreMy daughterMy mistressMy sanctuaryMy friendSingingTouch Me Babein the garage1970 reverbJust smoked a jointDad came homeunexpectedlyCaught meHard to explainthat odorSaid I soundedlike Morrisonthen and nowStill singin the showerHope she dropsthe soap
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Hoi hoi @Poetspeak,
Hope this finds you well?!How recognisable! My parents didn’t mind. They feared nicotine more than the occasional joint.
Maybe Amsterdam being the difference?Love your writes. Keep them coming please.
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Hi Gus
Thanks for the street cred
Hope all is well with you !
Keep on Rocking
PS
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good morning dearest Poet looking good and I’m sure singing great ❤️
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I only sound good in the garage, it’s cross between Morrison and Elvis.
Alcohol helps when listening
Thx Brenda
X
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What a way to open. Love this piece;))
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Hey
I still remember the wordsAmazing, right ?
Thx Fia !
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Oh fuckballs, missed you Sherrif.
Love the vibe, the near-hippy feel and the captured moment of youth. This is a gorgeous momento.
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Wow Betty
Before your time but you know
I love that
Famous Morrison line
“I woke up this morning and got me a beer”
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Beautifully penned, Speak. Excellent write my friend. Morrison was one of a kind indeed. Odd fact, Robby Krieger the Guitarist actually wrote the lyrics to “Touch Me” among other Doors songs. He was like their secret weapon in a sense, Morrison did write the bulk of their lyrics though. This is why I love poems referencing music. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Not surprised with Kriger penning the songs. The dude carries it and he’s still out there gigging ..
Thx Damien
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Alive and gigging, maybe?
I personality think that, as the number of stages seriously were lowered in Corona times, the grey tigers have the moral obligation to make room for the wild young musicians.Grey tigers includes me as a matter of fact.
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I’m pretty grey too but we’ve lived to tell so far …
Thanks Gus
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This is the PS we all know and respect. An artwork wouldn’t go amiss either!
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I did have a picture of me in my underwear at that age.
Maybe I should try to sell it with my used man boxers
Thx Rob
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Whew, chilling. The mind reacting to itself. Creative way to explore the tension between control and chaos, intimacy and decay. I’ve never been much of an introspective writer; at least I’ve never sat down and said I’m going to write in that way. And while your piece is indirectly introspective, given the abstract images, it does make me think. its the way you show a mind caught in strange, looping thoughts while trying to make meaning of overwhelming feelings. Anyway i’m rambling, this was short and sweet.