Crimson, your poem reads much of laden sadness and reluctance. Love sometimes becomes distorted and misrepresented in relationships when love, respect, integrity and honesty is not reciprocated.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

I can sense a shattered emotional connection.

Decaying miserably, upon disrepair.

Healing is what matters the most going forward. x

thank you dearest Adagio for the love on this ❤️

This is felt. The mindless scrolling for children at a time when the mind is developing. Good one

Very straight to the point.

I agree, AI is taking over faster than it appears.

A splendid read. x

I like how your poem methodically draws the reader in. Perhaps time management is what separates the men from the boys. There is a difference between a kiss and a lip service. Desire is a language…very uniquely true.

Passionately penned, CG. Excellent write with many layers my friend. This one is more than meets the eye. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

subtle and vulnerable – I love your rhythm, Curly. Harriet -Jacqui xx

Thank you, Peter… that’s really kind.

Thank you, Atticus… I’m really glad it spoke to you.