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Read MoreYou lied to me.You told me you were my friend.I believed you were godsendA lover, not hell bendOn destroying me. You tricked me.You told me we would be together. I believed we would be foreverA couple, not the devilBent on killing...
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Powerfully penned, Sam. Excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Very good ink
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Read MoreIt was a beautiful spring day. Birds were singing, wild flowers were sprouting and we were riding towards our doom. More than fifty of us rode out of the school that day not knowing that less than half will...
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Read More"What the hell," I cried out as I fell to the ground on my back.Peter ran to me and tried to help me stand up, "How did he throw you to the ground so fast?" He asked."Well thank you...
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Hey Sam.
Loved the structure of this. The poem is great but there was movement too.
I love those kind of writes.
I like how you transitioned to questions towards the end.
Spectacularly done amigo!