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Read MoreI could hear Joe Nichols' "Brokenheartsville" blasting through the bathroom door as I reached for the handle. Dan had his phone volume on maximum and was harmonizing to the piece perfectly."...Here's to the past, they can kiss my glass!...
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Conveniently, tomorrow is Sunday. Woops… that’s actually today in NY. I’ve got 3 minutes.
So, anyway… I hope that means you like it.
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Passionately penned, DK. You definitely know your way around adjectives my friend. Very descriptive indeed, the flashback with the events of the wedding, was a nice contrast to the festivities. Deep undertones my friend, incredible storytelling. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It makes me happy that you noticed the wedding flashback because putting that in there was sort of a pinnacle to the experience. I didn’t mean for it to be a contrast so much as a reference to guilt and obscenity, but then, you’re right. What could be more opposite than matrimony and slimy bathroom infidelity?
You always make me think, Damian.
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Hell yeah. Publish this stuff Meg!!!
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Yeah, I can definitely see this in Barnes and Noble. I’m glad you like it, though! Thanks for following me on this.
xoxo
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Wow. You nailed this one.
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Hot Damn, Thomas! I was waiting for you to give me the go ahead. More to come…
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Ohhh, goodness-ME!
How can I adequately explain how fully I’ve enjoyed the foreplay, and every single succulently filling bit between Dan’s ‘n Meg’s actual consummation, and ummm-HMMM, what a magnificently sublime consummational array of endlessly various climaxes it was … WHEWWWEE!
Excuse me, please, Ma’am, while I turn up the oxygen supply!
Onward, UPward! ⁓ Rascal🖌-
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You know, I never thought of this as ‘consummation’, but I’ll give you that interpretation! I’m super pumped that you like what you see, and I hope you can imagine what you read adequately enough to take that to bed.
I love your comments, Richard!
xoxo
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Read MoreLay me down in the bed of poppy flowers so I may dream Lay me down in a bed of roses that screams romance and tenderness Lay me down in a field of sunflowers as the soft breeze cascades over our...
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hello lovely Fia this is beautiful and so serene 💕
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Thank you, Crimsin<3
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You are making my petals open from way over here. Just imagine my aroma as an arrangement on your table. You took the words right out of my mouth… LAY ME
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You are definitely my wild flower.
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! A lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. You are going to have a Tome soon. lol appreciate you.;))
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Sounds very blissful. Nothing like a day of bliss. Great ink.
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Thank you, Nick. It is blissful.;))
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Enjoyed this.
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Thank you, Adagio;))
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A lovely, delicate piece. Well done Fia.
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Thank you, Keith
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;))
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I really like this. Feels like classic poetry. Warm and nostalgic. Very nice, Fia
Naaj
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Thank you,Naaj;))
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Love the way you write Fia, enjoyed this read..
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Thank you so much, Fred
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Read MoreWhich is easier to find?Happiness or Suffering?Which lasts longer?Happiness or Suffering?Which teaches us the most?Happiness or Suffering?Seems that Suffering is easier to find, lasts longer and teaches so much more than Happiness.Next time you're feeling really happy see how...
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This is a pondering thought. I think some find it hard to let go. There are those who feel locked in place without a key to release them from the suffering. Then those who are extremely happy all the time it is like an endorphin rush that they crave to reproduce.
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Thanks Fia
Nobody is always happy…..they may appear so.
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so true dearest Benny I know I will be happy again different but happy 💕
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Read MoreI’ve Lived Running From lifeTo a life I don’t wantTo live Searching For a loverTo loveWhen I knew Many I’ve loved Pretending I knewknowing I don’t evenWant to know Looking For a pathOn the waysOf life inMy final days WonderingIf I lived The life I meant To live Or the oneI livedIs the onlyOne I...
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I really liked this Sam. It reminds me on a personal level about myself. Can connect to it. Well done!
Daniel
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Very introspective vibe. I thoroughly dug it
The pic is dope as wellNaaj
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This life you are trying to figure out is a puzzle. Who are you living for? Good questions.
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hello dearest Sam beautifully introspective I’m a firm believer in self review 💕
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Brilliantly penned, Sam. Great introspective write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Excellent. Love the wording and construction of this write.
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I like everything but the end
“Just so you know”
It felt unfinished, it felt as if it didn’t fit with the rest.
The rest felt powerful and driven.
Regards James
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Read MorePrologue How it all started and was lost... I have always had an addiction to sex. Before I lost my virginity to my first big love in high school, it existed as an obsessive thought. Going further back, I...
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The prologue, set up the expectation of what we are about to experience in this story was done well. But I have to admit this journal entry of a story was eye opening. This is an enjoyable read and the vulnerability of the piece is good.
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First word and first reaction. Jesus.
I do not say that often, but you made me say it so many times that I may have to go to church. What a chapter.