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Read MoreHow much more can I swallowThe injustice of justice is hollow and bitterClaiming they’re just looking out for meSmiling and lying for everyone to seeWhat do they want from me?Treating people like strangers in their own homeTrumped up charges...
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Thank you, crimsin
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So glad you called me in on this write, Fia. I really dig what we accomplished here with this spill my friend. It was an honor working with you. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you. It turned out better than I thought,
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Read MoreOn this vehicle with no one behind the steering wheelI am afraid of the windinvisible in nature and yet always present, loomingAnd chewing on its edible paper cutsI grew feathers in my armsAnd I stare back at it with...
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Cleverly penned, Fia & M.E. Love the back and forth of the write my friends. Appreciate you both.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Appreciate it.
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Thank you Damian! “)
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The pleasure is all mine, Fia! Thank you! “)
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Thank you M.E :)) <3
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Read MoreIt’s just another shitty day in paradise.The sky is a uniform grey,not the ominous kind, but soft and familiar, like my grandmother’s hair. A fine rain drifts down, blown every which way by a world weary wind. Somewhere, birds...
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hi Benny it appears are minds are on similar wavelengths I don’t like to write about war but the suffering is on my mind like I can feel their pain on my own body…when will people realize this fact? great write 💕
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You and crimsin’s, writes are very powerful tonight. You’re right it is not going to be alright.
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Thanks Crimsin and Fia.
Whilst I think about such things I don’t let it weigh me down or make me angry.To empathize with all who suffer allows me to look out the window with joy….mostly.
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That is good.
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We have a lot to be thankful for, Benny.
I think you’re a hero quietly relaxing in your garden
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As a nurse, you’re the hero.
I’ll settle for being a mote in the eye of whoever created whole shebang.
Thanks for the lovely comment.😘
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Incredible write my friend, phenomenal imagery. Never thought I’d see such sad days. Spot On. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreOnce Upon a Midnight sky A rendezvous between you and I A secret plan that was never to be told Was let out and all the others now know I wear his mark that he had given me Your eyes show there is no...
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A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)
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Thank you, M.E I love Poe.;))
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a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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There was a wicked man
who had a wicked cock…But I’m a wicked girl
who wants to rock your world-
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You already do.xoxo
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Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶
With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.
Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.
“Once Upon a Midnight sky
A rendezvous between you and I”Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌-
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Thank you, and it is a pleasure to have you interpret my writing. I am still a student to poetry and I am learning from all of you. Thank you, Rascal
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You make sharing poetry a sparkling joy, Fia ✨
We’re all students, who can always improve and never learn it all.
You’re well on your way to mastery … keep faithful to your passionate goals and dedicated to listening with an open eye and willing mind.If you should ever seek a tutor! ⁓ Richard 👍
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Sam Nash wrote a new post
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Read MoreDo you think I can make you wetIf I swirl my fingersinside harder fasterI bet.Do you think I can make you screammy name If my tongue swirls insideand drinksyour cream.Do you think I can make them redeven more with a flick of a tongue or a bite for blood to shed.Do you think I...
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Yes, I think you are right. She’s scared of you. Woo. Nice poem
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yes im scary … that is why you are running too…
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Each line reads like throes of little death. Well penned!
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Thank you for your support… appreciate it
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Mmmm…. Ok I’ll shut up and get to work… can you survive that?
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Powerfully penned, Sam. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend
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I’ve been thinking about you all night.
I’m tired of thinking.
Get busy-
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I was busy… if I tell you you won’t believe me
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Don’t you know that I believe everything you say
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wow dearest Sam this is evocative and dangerous 💕
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evocative ?… yes…. dangerous ??? … no… well, maybe… only for those who moan… but thank you for reading and commenting dear Crimsin
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you made me smile 😊
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I feel the heaviness and power in this write 💕